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SparklingKnight
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This is my original poetry

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iMogwai
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Shepherd

So far, so good.

But really, why don't you wait until you actually have something to post, then include it in the opening post? You'll only risk having your thread locked before you get a chance to share your poetry otherwise.

SparklingKnight
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All the things I love

The beautiful sky
The birds that fly
The flowers that bloom
The bride and groom
The mountain tops
The farmers crops
Are All the things I love

I love to play
With my friends all day
I love to sing
Its a beautiful thing
I love to dance
Jump and Prance
These are all the things I love

I thought of this in two minutes is it good or bad?

Darksaber
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i think there good

iMogwai
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I agree, it's pretty neat. It's happy too, which is nice as well.

visitlegend
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Thats a pretty neat poem.
Wow just wow almost made me cry again.

-Legend

SparklingKnight
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Childrens sadness

All the birds are flying
All the children are crying
They dont know why
But they try and try
To laugh and play
And stay happy all day
But when it comes to the night
They get a fright
So they have to cry
and stare at the fly
Thats sits on the wall
It makes them bawl
So all day long
they just cry
Why????

I know it is very bad

Darksaber
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that one is an ok one not the best

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