Forums → Art, Music, and Writing → do you like my ode
ode to pie
pie delicous pie
there's apple there's pumpkin there,s more
when you take a bite the flavours ignite
and leave you longing for more
pie wonderful pie
if I could I would eat them all
when I eat a slice I try to be nice
so that maybe I can get more
what do you think
I think that the rhymes could have been better, and you could have used better vocabulary. Also, the ode is a form of poetry where you would say things like you were sending a letter to a piece of pie.
For example: Dear Pie.
You are so scrumpious and flavorful Etc....
You get the picture. You made the ode about youself in the ending line, so the whole poem therefore felt incomplete.
Overall I would give it a 6/10
fine ode but it will better when u make this longer :-)but u ve used fine rhymes...
really good - put a smile on my face. clever way of rhyming slice nice etc
thanks for the feed back and my Language arts teacher seemed to like it 100%
I hope you are NEVER my english teacher, I would fail before I wrote my name one my essay!
i like it good work
thank you very much
its pretty good
its awesome, especially the topic it is on
Its good for a non-writer
while being a non writer I take that as a compliment
I got an A onb it when I turned it in for school
lolcan i useuse your ode to help me with my poetry work?
You must be logged in to post a reply!
We strive to deliver the best gaming experiences on the internet and on your mobile phone. Play thousands of free online games, get access to free mmorpg games, online rpg games, fun online flash games, and more.
We offer free flash games in many different genres: online shooting games, online puzzle games, online war games, free online car games, free online hidden object games and dozens more.
This is the best place on the web to play online games for free! No matter what game style you prefer, we've got it here.
Want to advertise on Armor Games? Send us a note!
Gaming websites, passionate bloggers, and quirky streamers are welcome to share or review our games. If you need game keys, art, trailers, screenshots or more check out our press kit website.
Game developer? Visit developers.armorgames.com to request AG developer status, find documentation on our APIs, and get access to our development environment. Let's make sweet, sweet games together.
Looking for a publishing partner that can help your app rocket to success? Contact the mobile team to learn more about how we can help!