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BASHA
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ode to pie
pie delicous pie
there's apple there's pumpkin there,s more
when you take a bite the flavours ignite
and leave you longing for more

pie wonderful pie
if I could I would eat them all
when I eat a slice I try to be nice
so that maybe I can get more

what do you think

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plokkey
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alright thanks

too bad i gotta make like 20 poems

theorywizard
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hey, i like it just fine. because pie is a wonderful fruit, the more you eat, the more you feel like not eating as much pie because your stomach hurts a little and you get diahrea. do you guys remember the game The Origon Trail? you could get disentary in that game

srry
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that did not make much sence

RaptorExx
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hey, i like it just fine. because pie is a wonderful fruit, the more you eat, the more you feel like not eating as much pie because your stomach hurts a little and you get diahrea. do you guys remember the game The Origon Trail? you could get disentary in that game


What??? Actually, I won't ask, keep the answer hidden in your brain if there is an answer...

Anywayz, nice poem, I don't like poems, nor pie much, but I do like rhymes(no real reason), and off that...

It's very nicely done and actually makes sense compared to many poems given at Presentation Day, so awsome =D
BASHA
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thank you raptorexx

Hippyonfire
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[b]no

BASHA
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well that wasn't very nice...a.s.s.h.o.l.e.

BASHA
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anybody else like my ode

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i think it is one of the most creative songs i've evr heard...also...the rhimes are pretty good...and... i love pie!!!

BASHA
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wh thank you hitman

hitmanvp95
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ur welcome...lool

BASHA
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ur mom's welcome

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