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thoughts of a freak

Posted Dec 24, '11 at 11:02am

younieboy

younieboy

315 posts

why do you post somthing like this?
i don't understand why?

 

Posted Dec 24, '11 at 11:02am

xAyjAy

xAyjAy

4,900 posts

why isnt it a haiku? its 5-7-5. well, at least it is a poem.

 

Posted Dec 24, '11 at 11:04am

SoccerGirl27

SoccerGirl27

140 posts

its supposed to be the number of syllables not the number of words

 

Posted Dec 24, '11 at 2:01pm

xAyjAy

xAyjAy

4,900 posts

so its about every syllable of the words? well, some day i write maybe a haiku, but till that day i continue with poems. maybe i post a short story, too.

 

Posted Dec 25, '11 at 11:44am

xAyjAy

xAyjAy

4,900 posts

here is a picture that i maid with paint. i am not a profi with paint, so please bear with me:

[URL=http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/267/achievement1.png/][IMG]http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/6676/achievement1.th.png[/IMG][/URL]

 

Posted Dec 25, '11 at 11:47am

xAyjAy

xAyjAy

4,900 posts

sorry for the double post, i made an error.

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/6676/achievement1.png

 

Posted Dec 26, '11 at 7:05am

xAyjAy

xAyjAy

4,900 posts

this monster is nice

this monster is nice.
sure, it has claws
and thousand eyes,
but it doesnt kill!
it munches plants
in its three jaws
and while it flys
it is harmles
but still
you dont will
allow me to
keep it by me,
you give it the final blow.
it didnt harm anyone!
sure, it wasnt from here,
but i will become
its avenger and go where
it is now.

 

Posted Dec 27, '11 at 8:01pm

xAyjAy

xAyjAy

4,900 posts

what would we do if life would not be interesting?
would we sit around, doing nothing, to pass time?
if you are bored, would you make stupid things?
can someone gets so bored that he kills something?
i dont know, i pass the time,
with thoughts, full of ideas.
if i have none, i hear music,
or i read, if i find nothing
to read, i would write down
some ideas of creatures or
weapons, maybe a world with
fantasy, filled with sci-fi.
but they are all of my own,
dreams and nightmares and
someday i share them all
to everyone. but not now,
i must learn and try to
make short tales and poems,
to share my dreams,
to show my thoughts,
to motivate others
and to inspirate
like live did it
to me with love.
no hate for others,
they should not make
the same mistakes of
their ancestors and
kill each other with words
that will start a new war
to get what only one will.

 

Posted Dec 27, '11 at 9:09pm

KineticNinja

KineticNinja

171 posts

Go to English class pl0x

 

Posted Dec 28, '11 at 10:53am

xAyjAy

xAyjAy

4,900 posts

Go to English class pl0x

i do, i am in an evening school and the teacher says i should work on speaking "th" in words like "the", but besides that my english is good, says she.

 
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