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THE THIRD TIME IS THE CHARM!

As some of you might already know. I'm Moon. This is my third attempt at keeping a thread alive.

It's totally gonna die,
and I might cry.
But it's worth a try :3

^ Poem of the OP. Please Help the poem prove itself wrong, and don't let it die. Donate your time and feedback to this poor thread, so it can feed it's baby poems. :>


Anyways. I'm not really sure what all this will contain, I just hope there will actually be people willing to help me become better at whatever I try to do. So... I guess that means I will be writing (duh), drawing, and other artsy-fartsy stuff I shall attempt.

So... That's all I have for the OP! I hope that all onlookers will enjoy what I do!

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nichodemus
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This is aaaaaall gone and out of my system, thank the heavens. Teen angst is what fueled my poetry, that's probably why there is nothing new. It is actually painful to post some of these, because I wonder what the hell was I thinking when I wrote such silly things.


Ha! Same here. Lucky my old thread is hidden far away in the dark depths of the AMW.

Haven't really trawled through, but do you have more recent writings?
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Haven't really trawled through, but do you have more recent writings?

Unfortunately not. I'd like to attempt to write something new, but only after I'm done with this archive mess. I'm physically writing these poems into a little notebook, and editing them there. I think I may try to write something for the poetry contest whenever it rolls back around, but who knows.
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January 8th, 2011

On a journey to hide, back from the land we lived inside.
Keep running, and don't turn back.
If they spot your face, they will shoot and that's a fact.
Don't drop what you are holding, and if you do leave it there.
The thought of losing you to them, is something I don't think I can bear.
We are leaving so you can live, a free and full life.
Don't worry Son, by the end of this journey I'm sure it will be the end of my strife.
Carry on, Carry on, Don't let me slow you down.
Make a good life with the freedom that is to soon be found.
Keep going, make sure to keep your head low.
If they have spies in the trees, It is something I don't know.
We made it to the edges, now run and don't stop.
I'll catch up in a bit, But I can't promise I won't get caught.
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January 8th, 2011

Going in the wrong way
Looking for another way out
Can't find the back door
It's useless to scream or shout.

Deserted and desolate,
Barren and cold
Why does that voice scream at me?
So defiant, and bold?

Guiding me through the paths
Like an invisible hand
Showing me how
To cross this foreign land.

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I'm almost certain if I took the time to read through them chronologically, I can guess your life events Em.

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I'm almost certain if I took the time to read through them chronologically, I can guess your life events Em.

I would say that you are correct, but it isn't that easy. You can basically sum up the years before 2012 (ish) as me just being a sad little lonely person.That's all there is to it.

January 13th, 2011
A delusional mind
Is quite dangerous indeed.
Always tricking your head
As how to fufill its need.
Terrifying illusions
Believeable confusions
They always seem so real,
But deep inside,
You know you can't win in a devils deal.
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Not a huge fan of the last line, but I'll just edit it in me ole notebook instead. Any suggestions are quite welcome.
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My soul, coated in rime,
Cold to the touch,
Frozen in time.

Keeps me on edge, and bold.
But how long can I stay this cold?

It pains me to see
That I can never be
Truly happy, ever again.
Can't feel joy with my soul
Because it froze a long time ago

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April 3rd, 2011

Clouds and puffs of air
Meandering through the sky
Making crazy pictures
To be transformed by our eyes.
Giving rain an shade
All around the Earth
Then away they slowly fade
To come back in a constant rebirth.

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April 16th, 2011

Where is the child that I once was?
Innocent and ignorant.
At peace with the blindness.
I miss the old me
Where Mom and Dad would always take care
And I never had to worry.
Where is that child what I once was?
Where I never had to question
What someone does.
Where did I go?
Why in the world
Did I ever want to know?

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June 12th, 2011

Keep dreaming,
They all say,
And one day it will come true.
But they never mention,
What you will have to do.

Maybe they don't know,
But at the least they could try.
Instead of leaving you,
Stranded, to die.

Not a hint or a clue.
There is simply,
Nothing you can do.

They tell you to dream,
Of impossible things.
Shoot for the moon,
You'll land with the stars.
But they won't tell you,
Tell you just how far.

They send you on a raft,
Made from the hearts bliss.
Love can withstand all, right?
With love, you can't miss.

That's what they think,
As they send you on your way.
Nothing to be afraid of,
Love will make sure you're okay

Then you run into a storm,
And it changes very fast.
Turns into a horrid form,
Your raft will not last.

Love is overcome,
By what the world calls hate.
You jump from your raft,
You can't wait for it to abate.
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Some of these are just so bad that I don't really want to post them. I think my archive will be complete soon, because I'm starting to not post some of the really really bad ones, and that makes up a large portion of them.

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Some of these are just so bad that I don't really want to post them. I think my archive will be complete soon, because I'm starting to not post some of the really really bad ones, and that makes up a large portion of them.


No, no, post them all, like I post all of my drawings
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June 14th, 2011

My hands are tied
We can't escape.
We don't have much longer
Before it's too late.
We came to win,
But this was just bait.
More often than not,
You can't outrun fate.
We had a mission,
But we can't negate.
We were stupid,
We didn't wait.

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June 16th, 2011

The ice is inside me
I can't get it out
No matter how loud
I try and shout.

Slowly freezing my blood,
Crawling through my veins.
No matter what I do,
The ice will remain.

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All these poems are so unhappy!
Good, but unhappy. Go do something you love & write about that.

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December 29th, 2011

"I promise."
"I'll be by your side."
And I believed you.
I didn't think you lied.

Until I realized,
This is just a game.
I cared and you didn't,
What a shame.

I gave you my heart,
I thought I had yours too.
But when I went out with my friends,
I saw her. With you.

You told me you were at home.
You weren't going out tonight.
We won't make a scene here,
We'll go home to fight.

You said you were
By my side, hmm?
Well not only mine,
But a few others, too.

Now I left,
I ran out the door.
Hopped into my car,
Down the road I tore.

Maybe I shouldn't be
Going 100 down the highway.
But that doesn't matter.
I just have to get away.

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Going 100 down the highway.

I knew a guy who was clocked by cops at 114 after his gf broke up with him. Kept his license by 1 point.
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