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MoonFairy
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THE THIRD TIME IS THE CHARM!

As some of you might already know. I'm Moon. This is my third attempt at keeping a thread alive.

It's totally gonna die,
and I might cry.
But it's worth a try :3

^ Poem of the OP. Please Help the poem prove itself wrong, and don't let it die. Donate your time and feedback to this poor thread, so it can feed it's baby poems. :>


Anyways. I'm not really sure what all this will contain, I just hope there will actually be people willing to help me become better at whatever I try to do. So... I guess that means I will be writing (duh), drawing, and other artsy-fartsy stuff I shall attempt.

So... That's all I have for the OP! I hope that all onlookers will enjoy what I do!

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jezz
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FLP?

First Line Poetry, moron! <3

My armatar drawing looks adorable.
nichodemus
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Oh right....you were active because moi was active!

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The exterminator has a point, with the fwarf the beard is somewhat off, but I think that just maybe the uniform color combined with a lower quality digital rendering. Or unfortunately you just suck at drawing beards.

Although I thought Jezz turned out the best,looks almost identical.

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As some of you might already know. I'm Moon. This is my third attempt at keeping a thread alive


ME TOO! We have so much in common. :P
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Or unfortunately you just suck at drawing beards.

^This. I'll stick to evil 'staches and soul patches.

The only one I don't really like is Frank. It is OK but some features seem to be off. The rest are really good though. Otto is the best.

Agreed, I enjoyed drawing Otto the most. Maybe it's because I see him everywhere I go...? Frank was difficult... it looked decent-ish in the starting stages, but then I started coloring it in and I was like.... *&%&*^$^%$&*()^&!@#

First Line Poetry, moron! <3

My armatar drawing looks adorable.


You really HAVE been inactive!
And thank you!

Although I thought Jezz turned out the best,looks almost identical.

Well, I probably worked the most on hers... I wanted to get the hair... or whatever that is... right, and I think I did a decent job. At least 5 times better than Franks.

No comments on Bedelia the Butterfly? She's feeling left out. D:

ME TOO! We have so much in common. :P

Like, Ohmygosh that's so funny! Who woulda thought that? *looks back at old threads* Oh yeaaaaaaah!

Well, I've been working on that Old and New theme.... I've gotten zilch. Zero. Nada. Nothing. But I might sometime today!

I'll be happy to take any other requests, just so you gaize know. :3
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No comments on Bedelia the Butterfly? She's feeling left out. D:

I was just about to comment! What a beautiful butterfly... The insides / fronts of the wings are a little plain-ish. Looks good though!
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I was just about to comment! What a beautiful butterfly... The insides / fronts of the wings are a little plain-ish. Looks good though!

Thanks But by inside/fronts... oh nevermind I see what you were getting at. Yeah, I should've paid more attention to them, but I was focused on the middle of the wings and trying to make the inverted color thing work. But still, Bedelia and I thank you for your feedback
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-Pokes Bedelia-

Awww, what a cute butterfly :3

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OH MY GOD, THIS IS UP!
I feel like I'm a bit late.

A bit late, I was. Not you. :P

Theme.....theeemmmmeee......A Frozen Pond.

Poem? I'll see what I can do!


Thank you Hubby! I'm sorry I screwed up your armatar.

Dango tree!

Dango tree.... poem.... *tries to understand and fails completely*
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A bit late, I was


Talk like Yoda, we are.

Poem? I'll see what I can do!


DO IT!!!!
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From this point on, the only art that might show up here will be the doodles I doodle during the duration of school.

Are you taking an art class? You could put up your pics from it if you were. I think you would do well in an art class. Plus they are fun and not that stressful.
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Talk like Yoda, we are.

Day Okie!
^ If you understand that, you get cool points.

DO IT!!!!

Frozen pond one? Or... dango tree...?

Are you taking an art class? You could put up your pics from it if you were. I think you would do well in an art class. Plus they are fun and not that stressful.


I was in Art & Painting, but to get some free time to do APUSH work I switched it for Historiology.

I would get in another art class, but it might have to wait until next year, because so far the next 2 semesters are already full with classes.

And thanks But art classes here are fricking hardcore. Like, a-masterpiece-a-day-or-die, hardcore.
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^ If you understand that, you get cool points


Give me my cool points then.

Frozen pond one? Or... dango tree...?


That one.
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Give me my cool points then.

State what it is, and I shall. For all I know, you could be lying and just want cool points! D: But I don't believe you would do that... But I still need proof.

That one.


Motherofthetrees. THAT ISN'T HELPING.

But I do want to see if I can make a poem about dango trees.... Maybe I will later tonight
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For all I know, you could be lying and just want cool points! D:


What? No! Nooooooo! Its not like that at all.

But if you're not going to trust me, you can keep your stupid cool points.
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