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Posted Jan 29, '14 at 1:50pm

Riptizoid101

Riptizoid101

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I LIKE THIS ONE A LOT.

Though the theme is simple, poems about autumn just really get to me for some reason. Was that last one from FLP or just a poem you made?

 

Posted Jan 29, '14 at 9:32pm

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,421 posts

All of these are FLP, darling. Look at the date above it.

 

Posted Jan 31, '14 at 10:41pm

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,421 posts

November 25th, 2010

What did I just do?
To make you hate me?
Something just happened,
How is it I can not see?

I'm sitting here
In the dark room.
All alone,
With nothing to do.

I'm still lost,
As to what I didn't do.
You never told me,
You left me with no clue.

You'll come back to me,
I'll wait for you.
Because you told me,
That if I wasn't there you wouldn't know what to do.

I'll just sit here in this room
And wait.
I just hope
It isn't too late.

 

Posted Feb 1, '14 at 10:07pm

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,421 posts

January 3rd, 2011

The flag in the wind,
Tossed about
Abused by the air
But shines for all to see.
To say,
We were here first!
Or
This is my castle!
Pride is what keeps it flying.
Not the wind.
Even when it is folded on a coffin,
Pride, is the message it sends.

 

Posted Feb 1, '14 at 10:12pm

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,648 posts

Knight

Emily, are you still this morose, or was it just the consequence of teenage-hood? :L

 

Posted Feb 1, '14 at 11:19pm

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,421 posts

Emily, are you still this morose, or was it just the consequence of teenage-hood? :L

This is aaaaaall gone and out of my system, thank the heavens. Teen angst is what fueled my poetry, that's probably why there is nothing new. It is actually painful to post some of these, because I wonder what the hell was I thinking when I wrote such silly things.
 

Posted Feb 1, '14 at 11:50pm

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,648 posts

Knight

This is aaaaaall gone and out of my system, thank the heavens. Teen angst is what fueled my poetry, that's probably why there is nothing new. It is actually painful to post some of these, because I wonder what the hell was I thinking when I wrote such silly things.


Ha! Same here. Lucky my old thread is hidden far away in the dark depths of the AMW.

Haven't really trawled through, but do you have more recent writings?
 

Posted Feb 2, '14 at 1:44pm

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,421 posts

Haven't really trawled through, but do you have more recent writings?

Unfortunately not. I'd like to attempt to write something new, but only after I'm done with this archive mess. I'm physically writing these poems into a little notebook, and editing them there. I think I may try to write something for the poetry contest whenever it rolls back around, but who knows.
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January 8th, 2011

On a journey to hide, back from the land we lived inside.
Keep running, and don't turn back.
If they spot your face, they will shoot and that's a fact.
Don't drop what you are holding, and if you do leave it there.
The thought of losing you to them, is something I don't think I can bear.
We are leaving so you can live, a free and full life.
Don't worry Son, by the end of this journey I'm sure it will be the end of my strife.
Carry on, Carry on, Don't let me slow you down.
Make a good life with the freedom that is to soon be found.
Keep going, make sure to keep your head low.
If they have spies in the trees, It is something I don't know.
We made it to the edges, now run and don't stop.
I'll catch up in a bit, But I can't promise I won't get caught.
 

Posted Feb 3, '14 at 9:53am

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,421 posts

January 8th, 2011

Going in the wrong way
Looking for another way out
Can't find the back door
It's useless to scream or shout.

Deserted and desolate,
Barren and cold
Why does that voice scream at me?
So defiant, and bold?

Guiding me through the paths
Like an invisible hand
Showing me how
To cross this foreign land.

 

Posted Feb 3, '14 at 10:10am

nichodemus

nichodemus

13,648 posts

Knight

I'm almost certain if I took the time to read through them chronologically, I can guess your life events Em.

 
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