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Write My Song

Posted Mar 3, '12 at 1:06pm

TDOG422

TDOG422

330 posts

Here's how it works: I will write some lyrics, then you comment what should come after. As simple as that. I will put up a new line as I wish 'cause well, it's my forum. And it has to have at least 6 lines, including the one that I wrote (which ever it would be for the line you choose).
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Choice 1: The flowers grow, the sun rises, my heart breaks, when you surprise me.

Choice 2: Do you ever feel, unoriginal, over used and, super fat and frail?

Choice 3: Hey bud guess what they're comin' after you. So run, and run, and run until the morning sun shines bright on you. When the sun comes up are you safe, YES, so go and save the princess!

 

Posted Mar 3, '12 at 6:33pm

Alexandra222

Alexandra222

261 posts

I think choice 1 is great!

 

Posted Mar 3, '12 at 7:23pm

TDOG422

TDOG422

330 posts

then you should finish it with at least 6 lines including mine...

 

Posted Mar 4, '12 at 2:24pm

Alexandra222

Alexandra222

261 posts

Oh..

The flowers grow, the sun rises, my heart breaks, when you surprise me.
Oh, I just wish that you're right beside me.
I travel around the world 'cause I belive in you.
Just like Romeo and Juliet's love too
Maybe I could stand with you forever,
and ever after until we're not together.
But, I have a feeling that you and I were meant to be
With you right beside me.

(this ok?)

 

Posted Mar 4, '12 at 7:03pm

TDOG422

TDOG422

330 posts

Heck ya!!! Nice Job!

 

Posted Mar 4, '12 at 7:23pm

killersup10

killersup10

1,786 posts

Do you ever feel, unoriginal, over used and, super fat and frail?
well just stop the caring what the people think
you and me,we can share a drink
with our stupid ways of the road
we will be breezing though life like it is on easy mode
we are at the the party of the day
and have the best of times tonight

 

Posted Mar 4, '12 at 7:38pm

TDOG422

TDOG422

330 posts

HAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow...just...wow

 

Posted Mar 4, '12 at 7:46pm

killersup10

killersup10

1,786 posts

not .........meant ..........to be a comedy.......were you laughing at killersup or was it a good laugh?

 

Posted Mar 4, '12 at 8:09pm

TDOG422

TDOG422

330 posts

No, it was funny! That choice was even meant to be a comedy! Good job :D

 

Posted Mar 4, '12 at 8:24pm

killersup10

killersup10

1,786 posts

o ok cool then .......when you upload some more subjects killersup will write more

 
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