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Posted May 30, '13 at 9:25pm

TDOG422

TDOG422

330 posts

Well I guess it's time to update!

Choice #1: The flowers grow, the sun rises, my heart breaks, when you surprise me.

Choice #2: Do you ever feel, unoriginal, over used and, super fat and frail?

Choice #3: Hey bud guess what they're comin' after you. So run, and run, and run until the morning sun shines bright on you. When the sun comes up are you safe, YES, so go and save the princess!

Choice #4: Get the bass from the tower, don't let anyone get hold of the power.

Choice #5: Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice. Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice.

Choice #6: Woke up today, got my gun and knife. Ya-this is my life.

Choice #7: I can't believe that he just did this, but next time he'll shoot a-and miss.

Choice #8: You don't care enough to care, and I am just a little scared. Can I hold on to your arm, this is just to hard to bear.

Choice #9: Find the passageway, seal the door. Great aunt Julie is lying on the floor. She wasn't asleep, she wasn't awake. Just don't look back and do a double take.

 

Posted May 31, '13 at 10:07pm

killersup10

killersup10

1,789 posts

Extreme necro'd
Find the passageway, seal the door.
Great aunt Julie is lying on the floor.
She wasn't asleep, she wasn't awake.
Just don't look back and do a double take.
I loved her so much
I fear I might cry
Between you and me
She just had to die
I stabbed and I sliced
and I cut her in two
I really regret, I do
Never eating the honey inside her like winnie the pooh
Gorging myself on this feast tonight
Please promise you'll stay by my side
Through the thinks and the thin
Just like her ribs

 

Posted May 31, '13 at 10:07pm

killersup10

killersup10

1,789 posts

Extreme necro'd
Find the passageway, seal the door.
Great aunt Julie is lying on the floor.
She wasn't asleep, she wasn't awake.
Just don't look back and do a double take.
I loved her so much
I fear I might cry
Between you and me
She just had to die
I stabbed and I sliced
and I cut her in two
I really regret, I do
Never eating the honey inside her like winnie the pooh
Gorging myself on this feast tonight
Please promise you'll stay by my side
Through the thinks and the thin
Just like her ribs

This was made to be a piece or a song. Not Killersup's actual words.

 

Posted Jun 1, '13 at 1:42am

TDOG422

TDOG422

330 posts

DON'T USE THE N WORD!!! And nice. I like the winnie the pooh reference (#tbt...I sorry. I had to).

 

Posted Jun 1, '13 at 2:05am

pangtongshu

pangtongshu

8,704 posts

Woke up today, got my gun and knife.
   Ya-this is my life

I'm a dangerous endangered danger-fueled marsupial
Shooting cannons, canon, at canned soup-peels
The marching marchers March in March, but no feels
While they're killing killing chicklings chilling on veal.

 

Posted Jun 1, '13 at 4:58pm

TDOG422

TDOG422

330 posts

Sweet and short! Nice aliteration too! Over all good job!

 

Posted Jun 2, '13 at 9:31pm

Riptizoid101

Riptizoid101

3,385 posts

Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice. Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice.
Can't eat chicken, unless you got the rice.
Why are you drinkin' when you don't got ice?
Here's some shampoo for your hair lice.
What's that gotta do with food? Nothing!
But it sounds nice.

Rice, chicken. Rice and chicken. Rice, chicken, Rice and chicken.
Can't eat rice, unless you some chicken.
Take your finger out your nose, don't know what you pickin'
Got an ice cream cone? Give me a little lickin'
Now it's going off topic
'Cause I don't know what I'm thinkin'

Rice and Chicken. Chicken and Rice.

 

Posted Jun 5, '13 at 8:03pm

TDOG422

TDOG422

330 posts

...I...Y...B...ok? Is it bad that I don't know how to respond to that?

 

Posted Jun 5, '13 at 8:06pm

Riptizoid101

Riptizoid101

3,385 posts

It was intended to be a joke song. How is the comedy aspect?

 

Posted Jun 7, '13 at 6:27pm

TDOG422

TDOG422

330 posts

I know it was suposed to be funny, but...I don't even know how to express my thoughts into words right now. Just...shmer

 
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