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Here's how it works: I will write some lyrics, then you comment what should come after. As simple as that. I will put up a new line as I wish 'cause well, it's my forum. And it has to have at least 6 lines, including the one that I wrote (which ever it would be for the line you choose).
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Choice 1: The flowers grow, the sun rises, my heart breaks, when you surprise me.

Choice 2: Do you ever feel, unoriginal, over used and, super fat and frail?

Choice 3: Hey bud guess what they're comin' after you. So run, and run, and run until the morning sun shines bright on you. When the sun comes up are you safe, YES, so go and save the princess!

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Alexandra222
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I think choice 1 is great!

TDOG422
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then you should finish it with at least 6 lines including mine...

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Oh..

The flowers grow, the sun rises, my heart breaks, when you surprise me.
Oh, I just wish that you're right beside me.
I travel around the world 'cause I belive in you.
Just like Romeo and Juliet's love too
Maybe I could stand with you forever,
and ever after until we're not together.
But, I have a feeling that you and I were meant to be
With you right beside me.

(this ok?)

TDOG422
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Heck ya!!! Nice Job!

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Do you ever feel, unoriginal, over used and, super fat and frail?
well just stop the caring what the people think
you and me,we can share a drink
with our stupid ways of the road
we will be breezing though life like it is on easy mode
we are at the the party of the day
and have the best of times tonight

TDOG422
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HAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow...just...wow

killersup10
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not .........meant ..........to be a comedy.......were you laughing at killersup or was it a good laugh?

TDOG422
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No, it was funny! That choice was even meant to be a comedy! Good job

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o ok cool then .......when you upload some more subjects killersup will write more

TDOG422
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Alright. I didn't expect anyone to want more of them so quick!
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Update 1.1 alpha l
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Choice #1: The flowers grow, the sun rises, my heart breaks, when you surprise me.

Choice #2: Do you ever feel, unoriginal, over used and, super fat and frail?

Choice #3: Hey bud guess what they're comin' after you. So run, and run, and run until the morning sun shines bright on you. When the sun comes up are you safe, YES, so go and save the princess!

Choice #4: Get the bass from the tower, don't let anyone get hold of the power.

Choice #5: Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice. Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice.

Choice #6: Woke up today, got my gun and knife. Ya-this is my life.
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And I won't be putting 3 new choices up every update, many 2 or 4 some times.

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Choice #6: Woke up today, got my gun and knife. Ya-this is my life.
with the camo hat and the metal traps
the trees and the weeds deep down over my knees
the squirrels and the rabbits make the best jerkey around
we taking my new buck all around town
got my 12 guage over under ready for rabbit
we been shootin these shells for the past 20 years

TDOG422
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Nice hunter type theme. I like it. I was actually thinking a spy when I made that one, but I like your idea too!

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Choice #5:
Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice.
Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice.
Well I got me a kettle full,
It's smellin' so nice;
I threw in some salt,
And I tossed in some spice;
Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice.
Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice.
I threw in some cheese,
To keep out the mice;
I sold it at the market,
For a fair price.
Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice.
Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice!

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The flowers grow, the sun rises, my heart breaks, when you surprise me.
with that fake kindness waiting to break hearts.
the victims are bleeding red like they are poptarts.
but you don't care as ya move to another
well pretty soon ya gonna be a 13 year old mother.
2 inches of lipstick 5 pounds of mascara
guess ya just wanna get rid of that hog face
thats why guys run around ya with a fast pace
can't wait to see ya in the streets
with a sign saying 5$ for 5.


ment to be sung kinda kinda like a rap.

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Choice #6:

Woke up today, got my gun and knife. Ya-this is my life.
Some call me a gangster but that ain't right,
I'm just suffering depression with my wife.
We go on the streets and murder just for fun.
They scream and they shout butit's all over,
We tea-bag their bodies and they taste our buns.
They police come down and we say they're manikins,
but the police know all and we head down to jail.
Our kids come to see us and they say "F*%! you, NO BAIL"

How about that?
Oh, yes it is meant to be a comedy.

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