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Here's how it works: I will write some lyrics, then you comment what should come after. As simple as that. I will put up a new line as I wish 'cause well, it's my forum. And it has to have at least 6 lines, including the one that I wrote (which ever it would be for the line you choose).
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Choice 1: The flowers grow, the sun rises, my heart breaks, when you surprise me.

Choice 2: Do you ever feel, unoriginal, over used and, super fat and frail?

Choice 3: Hey bud guess what they're comin' after you. So run, and run, and run until the morning sun shines bright on you. When the sun comes up are you safe, YES, so go and save the princess!

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TDOG422
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funny, his name is webkinzlover (a popular meant-for-a-child-but-is-fun-to-everybody kind of computer game) but well...LOOK AT HIS POST!

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The flowers grow, the sun rises, my heart breaks, when you surprise me.Now as if a lock and key,you have tricked me.
Up in the air,with our love, now its gone no hope.Like you be on dope.
And ill be sitting here alone, and I dont need you.
Like a hammer and a screw.
I just cant take it!
wont make it work,
for this isnt my world.

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Why are you making people do the work for you. You could take their ideas, turn it into a song, sell millions, and be open to a lawsuit. So are you doing this for fun or are you trying to make a real song?

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I threw in some cheese,
To keep out the mice;


Wouldn't the cheese attract the mice to your food rather than keep them out?
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@jkl3848

wow...just-wow!"work"!?!?!?! "sell millions"?!?! REALLY?!?!?!??! you have GOT to be kidding me!

TDOG422
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If anybody was wondering, choice 2 was supposed to be a parody of "Firework" by Katty Perry...if you didn't get that...

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Woke up today, got my gun and knife. Ya-this is my life
I could feel the blood rushing to my head
My hands trembling
My legs quaking
The smell of fear in the air
The greatest game of all
MAN
Let the hunt begin

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UPDATE TIME!!!
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Choice #1: The flowers grow, the sun rises, my heart breaks, when you surprise me.

Choice #2: Do you ever feel, unoriginal, over used and, super fat and frail?

Choice #3: Hey bud guess what they're comin' after you. So run, and run, and run until the morning sun shines bright on you. When the sun comes up are you safe, YES, so go and save the princess!

Choice #4: Get the bass from the tower, don't let anyone get hold of the power.

Choice #5: Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice. Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice.

Choice #6: Woke up today, got my gun and knife. Ya-this is my life.

Choice #7: I can't believe that he just did this, but next time he'll shoot a-and miss.

Choice #8: SKRILLEX, NERO, BASSNECTER!!!

TDOG422
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I am your friendly neighborhood bummper and I'm BUMPING!

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Choice #5:
(obnoxious beat-boxing)
Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice
Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice

Yesterday I was making my lunch (yo)
I looked around and got a hunch (yo!)
Rice and beans are like two and two (yo)
But chicken and rice? THAT'S SOMETHING NEW! (YOOOO!)

(moar beat-boxing)

Chicken and rice make everything nice (yo)
But to mix it up, I'm addin' some spice (yo)
Now take a bite of that spicy, rice combo (yo)
PLOT TWIST; LET'S DO A CONGA LINE, FOOLS (YOOOO!)

(obnoxious conga line dancing)

I think I did this right.

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The Chicken rice starting makes me think of those cheesy, girly japanese songs. I'll go for it!

Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice. Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice.
Don't forget to steam and boil steam and boil steam and boil till' it's brown
Every day I live alone, with my sister named Nicole Shawn
And it's basically the same thing everyday
And it will always end this way

Why did mom leave my dad in the dust.
I didn't know which way to chose
I lived alone because both their hearts are so very hollow!

After that I'm

Punching bag, punching bag, punching bag, punching bag.
I'm working out working out working out till' my muscles bleed.
I think I may have broke my spleen
But I need to make my sister Nicole Happy
Because we need a good family(to maintain)

Why did mom leave dad away from the sun?
I loved both of them so very much
I lived alone because both their hearts are just too hollow!

But I need to

Wash and dry wash and dry wash and dry wash and dry
My dirty clothes dirty clothes dirty clothes until it's clean
Me and my sis get up early, just to do the laundry
Because we like to do all of it this way~

But then, I wonder,
Why did I ever get this fate?
I've been so nice,
but I never get the treats I deserve
All the candy in the world, will never fill my heart now....

Mom, why did you leave dad like rust
I loved you both so very much
But, you both married someone else so you don't really care do you?

(Moral, don't divorce until your children are married)

TDOG422
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...I didn't even read it because it's...long.

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Get the bass from the tower, don't let anyone get hold of the power.
Rule the world, an iron fist placed on your hometown.
The people once that stood and prospered,
They bow to you and praise you as a child fostered.

The spray of blood from fallen from the right and left.
Never you, no importance shields you and your power theft.
The people that called you friend and family,
Now no longer survive your barbarism assured you that.

How does it feel to know the monster inside you?
Where does it feed when your soul left long ago?
The hearts of men, you proved them strong beyond belief.
Even in death their secrets they did not reveal.

Never will control be completely yours,
Dictatorship lies just beyond your reach.
You are trapped in a web of dreams,
Though never phased by it do you seem.

Dictator, The Corrupt One By Me.

(In case you didn't pick up, its about dictatorship.)

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That was very...dictatership-y. Good job!

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Well I guess it's time to update!

Choice #1: The flowers grow, the sun rises, my heart breaks, when you surprise me.

Choice #2: Do you ever feel, unoriginal, over used and, super fat and frail?

Choice #3: Hey bud guess what they're comin' after you. So run, and run, and run until the morning sun shines bright on you. When the sun comes up are you safe, YES, so go and save the princess!

Choice #4: Get the bass from the tower, don't let anyone get hold of the power.

Choice #5: Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice. Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice.

Choice #6: Woke up today, got my gun and knife. Ya-this is my life.

Choice #7: I can't believe that he just did this, but next time he'll shoot a-and miss.

Choice #8: You don't care enough to care, and I am just a little scared. Can I hold on to your arm, this is just to hard to bear.

Choice #9: Find the passageway, seal the door. Great aunt Julie is lying on the floor. She wasn't asleep, she wasn't awake. Just don't look back and do a double take.

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