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TDOG422
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Here's how it works: I will write some lyrics, then you comment what should come after. As simple as that. I will put up a new line as I wish 'cause well, it's my forum. And it has to have at least 6 lines, including the one that I wrote (which ever it would be for the line you choose).
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Choice 1: The flowers grow, the sun rises, my heart breaks, when you surprise me.

Choice 2: Do you ever feel, unoriginal, over used and, super fat and frail?

Choice 3: Hey bud guess what they're comin' after you. So run, and run, and run until the morning sun shines bright on you. When the sun comes up are you safe, YES, so go and save the princess!

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killersup10
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Extreme necro'd
Find the passageway, seal the door.
Great aunt Julie is lying on the floor.
She wasn't asleep, she wasn't awake.
Just don't look back and do a double take.
I loved her so much
I fear I might cry
Between you and me
She just had to die
I stabbed and I sliced
and I cut her in two
I really regret, I do
Never eating the honey inside her like winnie the pooh
Gorging myself on this feast tonight
Please promise you'll stay by my side
Through the thinks and the thin
Just like her ribs

killersup10
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Extreme necro'd
Find the passageway, seal the door.
Great aunt Julie is lying on the floor.
She wasn't asleep, she wasn't awake.
Just don't look back and do a double take.
I loved her so much
I fear I might cry
Between you and me
She just had to die
I stabbed and I sliced
and I cut her in two
I really regret, I do
Never eating the honey inside her like winnie the pooh
Gorging myself on this feast tonight
Please promise you'll stay by my side
Through the thinks and the thin
Just like her ribs




This was made to be a piece or a song. Not Killersup's actual words.

TDOG422
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DON'T USE THE N WORD!!! And nice. I like the winnie the pooh reference (#tbt...I sorry. I had to).

pangtongshu
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Woke up today, got my gun and knife.
Ya-this is my life

I'm a dangerous endangered danger-fueled marsupial
Shooting cannons, canon, at canned soup-peels
The marching marchers March in March, but no feels
While they're killing killing chicklings chilling on veal.

TDOG422
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Sweet and short! Nice aliteration too! Over all good job!

Riptizoid101
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Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice. Chicken, rice. Chicken and rice.
Can't eat chicken, unless you got the rice.
Why are you drinkin' when you don't got ice?
Here's some shampoo for your hair lice.
What's that gotta do with food? Nothing!
But it sounds nice.

Rice, chicken. Rice and chicken. Rice, chicken, Rice and chicken.
Can't eat rice, unless you some chicken.
Take your finger out your nose, don't know what you pickin'
Got an ice cream cone? Give me a little lickin'
Now it's going off topic
'Cause I don't know what I'm thinkin'

Rice and Chicken. Chicken and Rice.

TDOG422
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...I...Y...B...ok? Is it bad that I don't know how to respond to that?

Riptizoid101
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It was intended to be a joke song. How is the comedy aspect?

TDOG422
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I know it was suposed to be funny, but...I don't even know how to express my thoughts into words right now. Just...shmer

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