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Posted Mar 28, '12 at 10:58pm

Schmiddy1234

Schmiddy1234

1,113 posts

Invisible Ink!

Invisible Ink
Sounds magical, you think so?
but its so real, yes

 

Posted Mar 28, '12 at 11:03pm

Schmiddy1234

Schmiddy1234

1,113 posts

Adelaide Crapsey
made the cinquain popular
Just more poetry

 

Posted Mar 29, '12 at 6:45pm

Roccess

Roccess

247 posts

@ Mr Schmidds (That's my new nickname for you), It was 1st rhymes with 3rd, 2nd rhymes with 4th, and sometimes a fifth line that does not rhyme with anything.
I wanted to write a Life and its problems poem that didn't suck for awhile, so here it is:
So pitiful
I once was a small boy called Little,
I was happy but hungry so pitiful,
So pitiful.

In my later yet earlier years I was weak one called Brittle,
Though I did have unseen talents, so pitiful,
So pitiful.

In my middle years I was strong and was called the Tophat,
Though I didn't know why, so sad,
So sad.

When I was older I was big and was called Fat,
A humiliating name, so sad,
So sad.

The few years before death I was smart and loyal, they called me the Constitution,
Though even I had trouble understanding why, oh the confusion,
The confusion.

After death they called me the Reunion,
I always brought the family out of confusion,
The confusion.

Was it good?

 

Posted Mar 30, '12 at 1:42pm

Jesman104

Jesman104

4 posts

All i have to say is wow nice poems.

 

Posted Mar 31, '12 at 2:23am

Schmiddy1234

Schmiddy1234

1,113 posts

@Jesman104
Thank yuo vey much I have a lot of fun writing them and they are for your enjoyment. Also, u can post your poems here as well

 

Posted Mar 31, '12 at 3:04am

MetalHeart

MetalHeart

233 posts

There's no rhym at the end

 

Posted Mar 31, '12 at 2:42pm

Schmiddy1234

Schmiddy1234

1,113 posts

@Metalheart
Haikus aren't supposed to rhyme If so, they are considered bad luck-ish

 

Posted Mar 31, '12 at 2:48pm

Schmiddy1234

Schmiddy1234

1,113 posts

Random haiku about bananas:
Bananas

Bananas are fruit
They're yellow and grow from trees
And are delicious

 

Posted Mar 31, '12 at 7:42pm

skittlezareAWESOME

skittlezareAWESOME

56 posts

I really like some of your poems! I kinda want to start posting some of mine on here, but I need to start writing them more! xP I only have a couple that are good and I like free-verse and haiku's. I think I like your haiku's the most out of all of yours...

 

Posted Mar 31, '12 at 9:46pm

Schmiddy1234

Schmiddy1234

1,113 posts


Thanks skittlez
U should post ur poems here, no sweat lol. Jst try and i'll help u with it