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Posted Apr 7, '12 at 9:32am

killersup10

killersup10

2,766 posts

I'm on a boat
I'm on a boat
I'm on a mother****in boat
I'm on a boat



umm smiddy,killersup does not know if you know this but that is from a song.......
 

Posted Apr 7, '12 at 10:34am

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

Schmiddy wanted me to update this, so...

Here:
1. Schmiddy1234
2. ExitPath97
3. wolflover260
4. Roccess
5. killersup
6. gnosiphile
7. ponyo97
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Posted Apr 7, '12 at 11:23am

Schmiddy1234

Schmiddy1234

1,113 posts

@killersup
I know it's from a song. I took an excerpt and put it here XD oops for calling it a poem though ^_^

 

Posted Apr 7, '12 at 11:24am

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

Only 8 more entries and the contest can begin!!!

 

Posted Apr 7, '12 at 1:47pm

MetalHeart

MetalHeart

233 posts

Home
If you don't have work
Don't just sit down
Watching TV and eating
Junk food in the dark
Because you can go out
side making your eyes
seeing nature and light
So love life and search
for work instead laying
down on the sofa being extinct

 

Posted Apr 7, '12 at 6:17pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,396 posts

Um, MetalHeart, do you wish to join the contest? I can put you on the list.

 

Posted Apr 8, '12 at 12:15am

MetalHeart

MetalHeart

233 posts

Contest ? You mean poetry contest ?

 

Posted Apr 8, '12 at 10:46am

Roccess

Roccess

247 posts

Okay again, this is NOT my entry; the contest hasn't started yet xD I'm just posting poems like usual... My actual entry is already made, but it might not be that goodd :S

This poem is about Armor Games. I've had the idea for awhile, but it recently came to me how it was going to play out.

Armor Games

I'm searching the Armor Games,
You are wrong if you say it is lame.
I go for a round of Exit Path,
Then take a break and go to Flagstaff.
Playing Chuck the Sheep,
Then playing Robo Leap.
They have every game, from Soviet Rocket Giraffe Go Go Go,
To Let it Flow.

They have it all.


Okay meesa done now.

 

Posted Apr 9, '12 at 12:14am

MetalHeart

MetalHeart

233 posts

The Giant
Hello Mr.up there
You must share
Hows the view with you
I think it's good too
I hope your not burning from the sun
But you must play with every one
Don't smash them with your large boot
And don't hold a gun then shoot
I hope you find a girlfriend
Do you have an ant
If she finds out you have one,she will be mad
Then the rest of here life is sad

The end !

 

Posted Apr 10, '12 at 12:12pm

crazyape

crazyape

1,800 posts

Sign me up, and now, my submission... yes I took this off my own poetry thread.

The Five Seasons

In the cool of these days
I lie in the grass and contemplate
In a fresh and gentle haze
These beautiful breezes of late
I long for times to go on forever
But alas, they always stay never
Through the days of heat
I long for the autumn
Through this swelting waves to beat
A cold, wet column
Like a fresh breath of life
To end this heated strife
In these months so gold
When fresh joy enchants
The colours grow bold
With gusts of cool windy rants
I fear my life is gone
When these perfect days move on
Like a renewal of heart
These ages are bathed in white
When gone are the times of hurt
Here the young are fresh with delight
Sweet peace, joy, and love
Soon flies away like a dove
Ah, this fifth season
It is how I am alive
It ends without reason
It all too soon doesn't arrive
When this season is gone
To the afterlife, I move on
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I get the feeling my epic copy&ampaste is missing something...