Any song writers out there with some lyrics they think could make it big? not asking for a whole song, and dont worry i wont steal them. Just wanna see what the general mood of the songs is these days, so Have Fun and get writing!
Verse 1: Sometime's life is flashing,every one is talking You see that I am shining but every body's looking You see me;Yeah!Yeah! Chorus: I see myself;in a mirror And I see the one inside of me but when you I inside my heart You can see the one;
I think if you were to make this one into a full song you should make it alternative rock, sort of like linkin' park. It just sounds like a rock song but with some extra little effects. I'd say have a fast rythm running under the effects, but keep the effects at a moderate pace, nothing more than eights and try to keep rests where possible. I really like what im seeing in your song.
Verse 1: Sometime's life is flashing,every one is talking You see that I am shining but every body's looking You see me;Yeah!Yeah!
Chorus: I see myself;in a mirror And I see the one inside of me but when you Iook inside my heart You can see the one;
Verse 2: Yellow light is flashing everybody is talking Yellow cabs are passing but they don't care about me But when i see my future and i say...
(CHORUS)
Verse 3: I see the shining lights, the fancy cars; the tall buildings what else you want; but when you look inside my heart you can see the real me Oh yeah;yeah yeah...
(CHORUS)
Rap: Yeah I got it, Everything I heard from my mom I got it Everything she wanted from me I got it Yeah I know moms can predict the future Oh yeah Oh yeah Oh yeah;
(CHORUS)[i]
Verse 4: One day I be the biggest thing yeah! Oh yeah,Oh yeah! I'm gonna be the next biggest thing.
Rap: Yeah I got it, Everything I heard from my mom I got it Everything she wanted from me I got it Yeah I know moms can predict the future Oh yeah Oh yeah Oh yeah;
I really hope this isn't really the rap..
Rhymes "I got it" with "I got it" with "I got it"
---- A quick rap:
See now this is disastrously A catastrophe that i can't believe And it's hard to see, how we used to be But I'm livin and I'm gettin a lil fittin in my spittin..for these rhymes i keep hittin (quick dramatic pause) Harder. And I swear I told her I've gotta go bolder But I just keep hittin the ground Harder each time I'm falling down
I'm being me and Dewing me. I'm the Poke master everyone else is just a Pokemon Ditto. They copy me. Flock to me.
D. Carter, I ball harder.
Fizzle to the top like carbonation. Welcome to the Dew-ezy nation. ----------------------------------------------------- A short rap in the style of MTN Dew Lil Wayne commercial. The lyrics are mine, but it's written for Dewezy.
