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Strop
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Okay, now my thesis is done, I've thought about it and decided now is a good time as any to work on my verbal skills. The idea is this:

* Give me a topic, and a style (of a person, or the name of a style). I will attempt to write a verse or two accordingly.

* If you could, give me links to the topic and examples of the style.

* No redistribution, please. The verses I write here are mine.

For example, in a previous thread, Klaushouse asked me to do a rap in the style of Kanye West on the topic of Pokemon, so I wrote one that could be rapped to Homecoming.

Have at it!

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flappybob999
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Peasant

Oh Kingryan,
none of us are cryin.
I'd rather pet a lion,
than listen to your rap.

As you play the sax,
you gotta learn the facts,
You gotta hit hard,
with electric guitar.
Oops! Too late,
sorry me mate,
I threw you out o' business
with my guitars assistance.
And to all ya'll peeps,
lookin and listnen,

Don't mess with me.

Flappybob999

ialwayswin
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Jester

Not so fast bob..

You mess with skater
you mess with me
we rap as a team cant you see
so you should just stop now
this is your last chance to take a bow
before you lose what you have left
or I'll take your soul,but its not theft
Your words are all just a joke
Might as well go take a smoke
cause its not a problem to make you submit
I have handled fire,I can handle shit

Sorry for the swear lol.

flappybob999
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Peasant

Whoa Ialways,
don't talk so tough.
Cause we both know that you like Happydays.
I handle both of yall,
with a blindfold,
cause yall both stink like some white mold.
I don't smoke,
maybe you do,
but I don't care,
cause
I got flare!
My soul is still with me,
I'm up and fighting,
against the rappers,
that took me crackers,
you better,
Back off! Back down!
Before I kick you
out of this town!

Don't move! Shut up!
Don't even make a sound.
Cause my rap is over.

Flappybob999.

Sorry for the shut up part.

ialwayswin
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Jester

How can you kick me out of what is mine
I'll take you down,I'll give you a sign
I have been doing this all my life
You can be taken down,even by a wife
Your words look like they came from space
may we sit down and say our grace
because after today my sins will be back
I'm coming with a whole new attack
I'll give you a chance to leave right now
or I'll take you down,dont ask me how
this battle is about to get hot
now your the one put on the spot

flappybob999
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Peasant

Alright, I'm starting a new rap, then taking on Ialwayswin later. I don't have time for you now. :P

Well,
I've been sittin here for an hour or more,
closed the windows and shut the door.
Soundproofed the walls,
waited until fall.
Why I did did it?
I'll give you a hint.

Cause I'm a
WILD MAN,
ON THE RUN,
DOWN THE STREET WITH A GUN,
SWITCHED ON MY COMPUTER AND WENT FOR THE FORUMS
AND STARTIN RAPPIN,
BACKSPACE,
BACKSPACE,
LOOKIN AT MY UGLY FACE,
WONDERIN WHY IT WAS ME!!!!!!


Flappybob999

flappybob999
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Peasant

Alrighty *Cracks knuckles* time to take on ialwayswin.

What you don't know,
about my flow,
is that everythin is mine,
everythin is fine,
Except your rappin,
so bad it's crappin,
the battle is over,
gone through the mower,
now if you would be kind,
get in a line,

with Flappybob999

ialwayswin
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Jester

This line may be slim
even though I can beat you with a grim
skater kid may have dropped out
thats why imma give you a shout
My rap flows so smooth
you can almost say its a groove
As your heart races under the pain
I told you,you shouldn't play this game
the golden trophy is mine in the end
its only just around the bend
You may stand in my way for right now
Intill I slaughter you just like a cow
the fans are all cheering for me
you'll lose cant you see
This is it I won't settle for a tie
Your going to lose and thats no lie
the spotlight is yours again
might as well go since you like this trend

ialwayswin

flappybob999
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Peasant

That first line was so stupid,
you don't even know the meaning of grim, so ludacrid.
Your mouth is so bumpy,
makes you sound so grumpy.
The crowd is all booing,
you're the one that's losing
can't you just see, you're so blind,
my words, they hypnotize.
The spotlight was always mine,
your words feel like a porupine,
always being so annyoing,
we all just said your getting boring.

Flappybob999

ialwayswin
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Jester

It may have been lame
but your about to face shame
as I think of things to say
beating me,theres just no way
my skill bar goes to the sky
don't think that you can get by
everyone knows I'm the hero in these parts
your no match for my great smarts
back off before you fall
my raps are big and yours are small.
goodday to you i may say
just to keep your words at bay

ialwayswin

skater_kid_who_pwns
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Blacksmith

well hey im back!!!
any waysss.....


wait whats was that'
take it back cause iallwayswin's with me
o don't you see
you can't me us both
double the rymes
in half the time
the clock is about to chime cause yo' time is up
cause iallwayswin taught me to hang though
my words are like a wall
before it you will fall
and try and crawl away
from this rapping game
but me and iallwayswin
we WILL put you to shame
$SKWP$

flappybob999
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Peasant

Skater kid who pwns,
and Ialwayswin,
stink like a rotten garbage bin!
Cause everyone knows,
that I am the hose,
that will rain on your parade,
this isn't charades.\\
Even if yall throw me out,
i'll keep on rappin, that's no doubt.
It's a win-win situation,
so yall are the ones that have to use concentration.
Yes I can see,
anything but me,
cause i'm the center of my world,
and you rap like a girl.

So yall are all stunned,
mesmerized,
hypnotized,
Cause i'm so fly

Flappybob999.

Note to self: Start going to other forums than this one! 8)

skater_kid_who_pwns
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Blacksmith

for yo info I am a girl(jk)
ain't that something
and my heart
it refuses to stop pumping
the crowd they all jumping off there feet for
for the dream team ofme and iallwayswin
we are not from no garbage bin
but thts were you are headin'
this is the time that you have been dreadin'
i can see all the sweat that you be sheddin'
cause you so scared of us
go an' find yo' boyfreind gus
so this is the last time i remind
fools like you
i make you all look like tools
so give in
before i make ya stop living
$SKWP$

ialwayswin
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Jester

To flappybob
If you mess with one,you mess with two
after our rap you are through
We know you can't take the pressure we'll bring
you think your good,but wait intill we sing
Together we slayed demons off the map
stop throwing words cause we know you cant rap
We walked to hell and back to the earth
while you sat here attempting to give birth
his name is no lie as he will pwn
this rap title we already own
wealwayswin,and this is one more
so boy just get down and walk out the door

ialwayswin

ManUtd4life096
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Farmer

Yo yo yo....(Screams and runs away)

Strop
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Bard

Choke act! Choke act! Somebody give that man CPR and a spine! *boooooooo*

:P

Man, the rap underground is such a harsh place!

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