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Hey guys, I'm planning to submit my first creepypasta on their website, but I don't know if its up to their standard... Would really appreciate some feedback from you guys!

Without further ado, here's the story...

It's in google docs tho...

[url=https://drive.google.com/file/d/0ByaZGEwiZSfCaXNPc19ucEpfaXc/view?usp=sharing]

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