It would work, actualy good job here is what I would do...
"Hey ryan, you tinhk this lady is like mental or what?" Ryan was about 25, blonde shaggy hair, And a muscular frame. He had been a forest ranger before the incident. "Who ever she is, I'm gonna say no, come on, lets follow her." Ryan moved first, looking back at my other campanion, Max who was my age, with brown shaggy hair, with blonde streaks in it. "Max, you comeing to?" I asked him. "Yeah, hold on..."he was checking a bed room nerby, but stoped and followed us into the room. We all took up our .22's and slowly walked into the room. We were ment with a terrible smell, and a worse site. Max hurled, ryan gasped, and i was frozen to the spot. There, sitting in a chair against the wall was a man, with a blood stained shirt still cliiing to his bones, with no meat at all left on him, he had been there for some time, and there was a hatchet sticking out of his chest. "Don't take him away from me! He is fine, why do they all say he's dead!" Turning now to the body,"It's ok sweety, we will have our marrige soon, dont worry." Now you three will join the rest that came here!" She wailed, and threw open a side door, and about 34 zombies came out, she dove out of the room, and locked it for the other side. Andy, quick! Baricade the door! He dove quickly flipping the table against the door way were the zombies were, then he pushed the china cabniet against it, makeing it impossible for them to come through. Now we had to get out. there Was no windows, and a locked door. Max, was trying the door, But was actually holding it shut, he turned to face us. He was white as a ghost. "Guys, you know when I was looking in that bedroom? I was looking at a shot gun, and I just heard it click! She is gonna kill us if the zombies don't we are traped in this room!" He was scared stiff, but Andy took action first. Me and Max being just kids, still got scared about this stuff, even though we know it was bad for us. Andy putting his foot on the mans chest, pulled, and removed the hatchet, he then walked over to the door, " You two, get against the wall, and stay down, if she enters the door, shoot her ok?" He swung down with the hatchet, breaking of the door knob and ruining the lock. There was a shot and andy fell, max started to yell out, But i cought his mouth, she thought we were both dead. She started to enter the room, "O hunny what did they do to you? Are you ok?" She stroking those bones again, And Me and MAx acted at once, we both pulled our rifels around, hitting her in the back and neck, she crumpled instantly. max ran to go check on andy, while i gathered some knives that had covers, and the shotgun, and the suprising amount of slugs. max, came back into the room with Andy, who was standing on his own feet without a scrath. "But we thought you got shot andy!" I yelled. "So did she" was all he said, he had matches in his hand, and we knew what hee had in mind. Gathering up our bags, we left, andy light it on fire, and we didn't look back. We were safe now.