Forums → Art, Music, and Writing → School Poetry Gallery - By KingRyan

ryan, i think u should stop writin stuff like this coz it makes me cry ='(

you write great poetry. unlike other poetry i've read before yours is not empty of feeling or just words on paper; yours flows full of emotions. i really like the way the you write. =)

This is one written for a girl I know....she wanted it for her assignment...

I don't think it's my best work, but the message is still there.

Child Abuse

The child sits in the corner,
With no-one that loves it.
It has bruises all over its body,
From where its father hit.

It's mother is gone,
Left long ago.
Leaving the child,
On death row.

And the murderer is its father,
A troubled and distressed man.
Who's hard days at work,
Are transferred the child by his hand.

And this child lays now,
In an awkward position.
Its arms and legs broken
In great need of a physician.

But now it is gone,
Gone from this life.
A broken victim of child abuse,
Stabbed with a butchers knife.

So how can this happen?
Almost every day.
Children beaten and killed,
In almost every way.

We need to take charge.
And we need to act.
Child Abuse must be stopped.
And this, my friend is a fact.

Ah...finally a more happier one... xD

Happiness

The sun is there,
Bright in the sky.
It warms up my body,
and makes me feel high.

The warmth fills my chest,
And I am just glad.
To be feeling happy,
How could I have been sad?

Happiness is better,
Then being upset.
Why ruin your days,
By being a blanket that's wet.

So smile, don't frown,
Life will get better.
You'll find love again,
And when you do, Go GET'ER!

It's , it's beautiful :[ :'

You are being serious right?

KingRyan

haha klaushouse,now i know why i don't wanna know what goes on in your mind!

king ryan,
i like your poems,but i think i like those that describes how you feel when you are heartbroken best.

Hey guys, sorry, but I was asked to take the poem down, apparently it will be reposted later? Ask Kingryan

Yep, thats right....

It had to be removed........

KingRyan

These are some of the bets poems I have heard Ryan they are great.

Well...I'll put that poem up again...

Well...I was sitting infront of my computer...and I just felt the urge to write something...since I am reasonably good at poetry (from feedback i've got) I decided to write a poem.

DISCLAIMER: This is not directed towards anyone, because to that person (you know who you are) I promised I wouldn't write you a poem...

This is just me expressing my feelings, and is in no way directed at anyone, except myself.
Well...time to write...

Well here I am,
And the world is still spinning.
I am out of options,
And am far from grinning.

I don't know what to do,
I don't know how.
I don't care what happens,
To me right about now.

A mutilated heart,
Strangled inside me.
Old wounds never healed,
Will never let me be.

Each time a new blow,
Smashes my heart.
The wounds of old,
Are torn apart.

The girl that I loved,
Dumping me for my friend.
Always being rejected,
My pain has no end.

But I am not dumb,
for life must not stop.
And by writing these things,
I can re-climb to the top.

Eventually this will turn out well,
And things will be fine.
But until that day I must press on,
And make the world mine.

Well? What do you think? Made up on the spot...

I hope you like it!

KingRyan

Thats a good poem KingRyan I really liked it.