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Well, an artist always has to be flexible, and able to accomplish the task at hand, no matter what.

On another note, I guess no one appreciates haikus D:

Just in case no one noticed, it says I LIKE PIRATES vertically and horizontally.

@Carlie
One of those military submarines, or one of the scientific research submarines? Either way, I'm a little too claustrophobic to go in one

@Klaushouse
That's cool, I hadn't noticed that

@ Uber

Your poem is one of short and sweet.
Im not gonna be around, I may be gone for up to two weeks..

@Estel
What in hell have you been doing? you just jumped well over 5,000 AP in a 1 to two day period, unless I am hallucinating! That should definately be considered. I mean, wood squire to gold knight? 13 Merits 483 game comments and 174 games rated. Well well..

@Klaushouse
I have no Idea what to think of that. seriously, besides that it's hard to read and is a bit chunky it's fine.

@Kingryan

Best out of us. Probably. I look forward to seeing competetion and may add on to my entry.

Good luck Ya.

Could some1 msg me if i win. I probably won't find it.

And also, I motion the next contest should be on hardships of emotional or monetary issues. Broad issue that really requires thought and deeper emotions.

What are you talking about? I just got over 2,00Ap, and I've gotten that over a two month span. 483 game comments? Those are just regular comments, AND game comments.174 games rated? I've only got a bit over 100. What have you been looking at?

good. I have MANY on that subject.

Well, an artist always has to be flexible, and able to accomplish the task at hand, no matter what.

I like water.
Water is fun
Yay for water
Water is uber pwnage
I like water

:0

I would beg to differ about being forced... taking art classes, you are often given a subject and asked to elaborate. What the artist *does* with that subject shows their true skill. If they are able to manipulate the subject into something they believe to be valuable, that shows a great deal of creativity.

my entry.

We live for love
we fight for love
we die for love

and often, love is even stronger
than the will to keep yourself alive
despite the will to survive

as the people that are the hardest to love
usually are the ones who needed the most
afraid to eventually become a ghost

true love is pure
pure as the water
often a motive, for a vengeance slaughter

cheers.

Haha, the theme of this week is water, and the only thing you did to relate was make a simile between love and water. I don't really think it will count, but it's up to Ubertuna.

Estel, yeah, I though on that, and eventually became weird.

But notice one thing, in the end, if the ultimate conclusion of this poem is that love is pure as water, the poem that seems to be about love, you can almost replace love for water, and it kinda have some sense on it.
It's ok if doesn't count, I had fun doing it.

cheers mates.

The water flows threw the river bank
as it goes to the new filled tank
refreshing the mind and even the soul
keeping me alive without a toll

The ocean pollution is ruining the earth
no more water that will break for birth
I hope for nothing more than the suns rays
along with a fresh glass of water to stay

One last wish before I go
as long as I let you know
chances will come and go
as long as you keep the water flow

We live for water
we fight for water
we die for water

and often, water is even stronger
than the will to keep yourself alive
despite the will to survive

as the people that are the hardest to water
usually are the ones who needed the most
afraid to eventually become a ghost

true water is pure
pure as the love
often a motive, for a vengeance slaughter

Haha, the first time I read that comment, I thought you menat that you could substitute every, "water," with, "love."

It's still a great poem though!