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ubertuna
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I have been noticing a lot of poetry on the site recently, and I thought it would be nice to have a friendly little poetry competition. There will be a weekly theme, and the entries will be judged by one of the moderators or administrators. This week's theme will be "Water." The deadline is Saturday, August 2nd. The winner will be awarded 25 Armor Points.

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DragonMistress
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The entries are closed for now, I'll be announcing the winner later tonight (after I get out of work).

I'm switching it up this week (hopefully it won't backfire on me) and having the form be haikus. There is no topic, so express yourselves.

Any poem not following the haiku form will not be considered to win. For a refresher, a haiku is a three line poem. The first line has five syllables, the second has seven, and the last has five. Have fun!

firetail_madness
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Oh, so that's what a haiku is. I've been wondering that for some time now.

Estel
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Gather your courage,
The time has come to decide.
Stay or come and fight.

firetail_madness
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I can never beat that.

I lose xD

Toadlord
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[b]For A Friend

We are Siamese Twins.
Joined at the head, we share thoughts.
Clones of different size.

Estel
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@Toadlord, for yours to work, you need to take out the middle syllable in, "Different." Try, "diff'rent," otherwise, that last line is 6 syllables.

Toadlord
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It really all depends on how you say it. Some people also say Sigh-uh-mese instead of Sigh-mese.

Toadlord
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Two Apocalypse

Shark7996
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Haikus

A haiku, I need
Ugh, what to write, what to write?
Oh, snap, this is it!

hojoko
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Can we write Haiku sonatas? (I think that's what it's called)

Gantic
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Aug 23, '08 at 4:44pm, Estel wrote:

@Toadlord, for yours to work, you need to take out the middle syllable in, "Different." Try, "diff'rent," otherwise, that last line is 6 syllables.


Aug 23, '08 at 4:48pm, Toadlord wrote:
It really all depends on how you say it. Some people also say Sigh-uh-mese instead of Sigh-mese.


The amount of syllables in a word is a funny thing influenced by metathesis, haplology, and elision (really fun words to say, especially together). Different notation would, perhaps, provide a standard for pronunciation, such as using an apostrophe to remove a syllable as suggested by Estel. An accent can be added to add a syllable such as in Line 5 of Sonnet 116.
And I'm pretty sure "Sigh-uh-mese" is the proper pronuciation.


Here is my haiku:

Omelette for breakfast
At the end of dinnertime
The chicken is done
Toadlord
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Here. I'll repost it depending on how you pronounce it:

For A Friend:

We are Siamese Twins.
Joined at the head, we share thoughts.
Clones of different size.

OR

We're Siamese Twins.
Joined at the head, we share thoughts.
Different sized clones.

Happy? Jeez guys

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Series of three connected Haikus with three syllable titles:

Falling Autumn

Maple Leaf
tongue of dragonâs flame
chastises drab leaves below
lexicon of life.

Falling Down
wind blows, knocks leaf off
tree; twirls, tumbles, tossed by
breeze; litters forest.

White Blanket
Falling blissfully
Stinging like nettles burning
Freezing Earth below; winter

I'm just experimenting, because I'm bored, so I got a CC license. lol

<a rel="license" href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/3.0/us/"><img alt="Creative Commons License" style="border-width:0" src="http://i.creativecommons.org/l/by-nc/3.0/us/88x31.png" /></a><br /><span xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" href="http://purl.org/dc/dcmitype/Text" property="dc:title" rel="dc:type">Falling Autumn</span> is licensed under a <a rel="license" href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc/3.0/us/">Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial 3.0 United States License</a>.

crimsonblade55
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I am liking these entries.If only I was good at making up stuff that rhymed in a clever way.

DragonMistress
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Sorry I was so behind on announcing the winner, I've been super busy. ANYway, the results are:

First Place

MVPGuy22

Second Place

Shark7996 (Love the twist!)

Third Place

Estel (I'd love to hear that as a song!)

This was by far the hardest week to judge. The haikus are looking great, feel free to take dramatic license with pronunciations, etc. Keep it up!

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