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ubertuna
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I have been noticing a lot of poetry on the site recently, and I thought it would be nice to have a friendly little poetry competition. There will be a weekly theme, and the entries will be judged by one of the moderators or administrators. This week's theme will be "Water." The deadline is Saturday, August 2nd. The winner will be awarded 25 Armor Points.

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mvpguy22
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question: does the poem have to rhyme??

Marbro
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question: does the poem have to rhyme??

I am not an administrator, but a poem is just a literary piece of writing designed to convey a vivid type of feeling or experience. It often has stanzas, rhythm, rhyming, meter, but really it does not have to have any of those.

mvpguy22
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This is my submission...this is my first one!


The Sweater

It is winter now and it is quite cold,
And no matter how many times your told,
You moan and you whine over your itchy red sweater,
Your mother tells you that you better,
Bundle up before you head outside.

It is spring now and t-shirts are in,
The warmth of the sun feels good on your skin,
That once needed cloth is stuffed in a drawer,
Not needing it now, as it is seventy-four,
You put on some sunscreen before you head outside.

It is autumn now and your back to school,
With a new shirt and new shoes, you look cool,
As you head out the door (you're late for the bus)
Your mother calls out and now you fuss,
For that itchy red sweater is on you...and you head outside.

DragonMistress
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question: does the poem have to rhyme??


As Marbro said, not necessarily. Haikus don't rhyme, neither do most of e.e. cummings' pieces (my favourite poet) so really, as long as theres some rhythm or it sounds nice together, it's fine.
kingofgames
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what is the new topic? "water" " air"? what do i have to be poetic about? xD

cycloolephin
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With lots of games rated
And all metal plated,
He has tons of AP,
Which fills him with glee.

It used to be he only played when bored,
But hey ho, now he's a lord!

As he sits on his bed, writing this poem,
He eats chex mix and knows AG's his home.

When he logs on his friends all say "Hi",
Writing this poem was easy as pie.

ManUtd4life096
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Cycloo, the topic is clothes. =p

Gantic
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Haikus don't rhyme, neither do most of e.e. cummings' pieces (my favourite poet) so really, as long as theres some rhythm or it sounds nice together, it's fine.


I'm pretty sure most of his poems did rhyme, but mostly not all the way through though and a lot included slant. Maybe it's split about 50/50; it's hard to tell.

So would that be a no on poems like "l(a"?
mvpguy22
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e.e. cummings was the one who also doesn't follow correct grammar and punctuation rules.... I believed he wrote, anyone lived in a pretty how town if my memory from last year's english class is correct....

thepyro222
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What's the next topic going to be?

kingryan
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mmm...this is mine....just give me a second while I warm up my poetry skills......

Clothes

We take clothes for granted,
We choose what we wear,
and forget about those,
whose clothes are made of air.

We mix and we match,
from colours to styles,
We shop and we shop,
Going through all the aisles.

But children elsewhere,
sit with rags on their backs.
No shop in site,
and no clothes on the rack.

Their rags are all dirty,
as they sit in the dust.
Without any food,
Or clean water which is a must.

And yet here we are,
sitting in our warm pants.
Wearing our Roxy tops,
and jumpers from our Aunts.

And yet what of these kids,
who sit in the cold,
with only rags for clothes,
which to them are real gold.

So what if we bought,
some less expensive stuff.
Moved away from Adidas and Nike,
Whose child labour factories are so rough.

And what if we bought,
just Target brand things,
And gave the money we saved,
and stopped living like kings.

We need to have heart,
for those who are in need,
For they have no clothes,
And this message you must heed.

By KingRyan
(and no...I don't work for worldvision!)

DragonMistress
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OK, the votes are in! And as per popular demand, I will give a first, second, and third rank. This was the hardest week to judge, everyone did great!

First Place
Gantic!

Second Place
MVPGuy22!

Third Place
Estel!

Great job this week guys, I love seeing everyone's different styles! Alright, so I guess I'll give a less random topic this week...so the topic is jealousy. Have fun with it!

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Here's my poem-

Who do you think you are?
to try to cut me down
Who do you think you are?
to drive me into the ground
Who do you think you are?
to try to make me mad
Who do you think you are?
to try to make me sad
Who do you think you are?
red hair and beautiful eyes,
to throw me away and go with him,
much to my dismise
Who do you think you are?
to leave me in the dust
Who do you think you are?
to fill your life with lust
But in the end no matter how hard I try,
you refuse everything,
and just say good bye
Allthough you don't think it's true,
the reason for all my pain
was because I was jealous of you.......

thepyro222
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I think this fits the topic...

Nothing to Loose
--
This is the end, I have nothing to loose,
I find myself torn and confused,
You have destroyed my life, and now I will destroy yours,
Get ready to kiss the floor,
Come on, do something,
I have not come here for nothing,
Pull the trigger and get it over with,
Too late, you hesitated; you should have killed me forthwith,
Now it is time to die,
I release my battle cry,
Are you feeling brave or are you out of your mind?
Not hard to kill me you should find,
I have my revenge, and you are gone,
All my burdens are done,
I now have nothing to live for,
I now have something to die for,
Put a gun to my head and pull the trigger,
Itâs my time to die; I figure,
My story ends with me dead,
Nothing I did fills me with dread.

GaryExtream
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The Book water... said to dread life from humans

Not only dose it dround them and dread them...

It pushes them into a dark hole of water....

this element dose this to anyone........

the water dose this everyday and will never stop....

Garyextream. P.s not the best im not good at poems

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