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DragonMistress
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First, I will post the overall rules, and then I will post the specifics about this week.

Original rules, as stated by Ubertuna:

It must fit the week's theme.
It must be submitted by the deadline.
It cannot have inappropriate language in it.
It cannot be stolen (if you plagiarize, we will find you).


Also:

The poem must be created for this contest
A user cannot win two weeks in a row (though everyone is welcome to submit every week!)
Only one submission per user will be accepted

As we all know, the winner will recieve a merit, and their poem will be featured on the _Poetry_ page.


OK, on to this week's topic...Again, we are having a style instead of a theme. Also, this week we are having TWO WEEKS to do it, instead of the usual one. Why? Because this will be an EPIC poem. Or, rather, a parody of an epic poem. Generally, epic poetry is very long, and tells the serious story of a heroic figure. Well, this week, the epic figure is YOU! Write a long poem (I'll leave the definition of 'long' up to you, but give it a good go) about the heroic story of you! It can be silly, serious, whatever... just have fun with it. You have two weeks, so have a great time!
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adrecka_33
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To love is to be a fool.
To let your heart control you,
Leting take you over.
So that you become,
Nothing more then a heart.

To love is to be a fool.
Then before you know it, its over.
And your heart is lying there on the floor,
Ripped out in cold blood,
By your once lover.

To love is to be a fool.
To trust yourself to someone else,
When who knows what they will do.
To love is to set yourself up for hurt.

Cenere
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Back with more fail:

If love is so good
why does it hurt
If love is so beautiful
why does it seem like a monster
I do not understand

skater_kid_who_pwns
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capter one began
it was no ones plan
but your eyes wont let me escape
Your name is set in stone on my heart
i never want to be apert from you
but babe know that this is just the start

O please just turn the page
It's the way it should be
me and you will make chapter two
and after we are done
we will shake the world and do what we want
i'm asking out front, please be my chapter three

So now our books come to a close
i can't explain why i love you
you ripped me heart out once again
and then you slipped away.
The ride with him proved to me fatal
you moved away from the wall
and thats all that you got to do
and you are the one to lose
everything..........



Eh, worst thing i've wrtten in a while, but what the hey.

Zophia
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When the laughter hurts beneath the happy surface
When the comfort of knowing another so well
Becomes the pain of knowing things that were
Are over

Was the point of it all not to be that close?
Was this not the reason
For the pain that struck upon realizing
That not only could this end
It did?

... LALALA.

Fritz_Rublehem
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Here's my shot at love poems:

If There's...

If there's one face I want to see,
so beautiful, so true,
one smile that makes a difference,
to everything I do.

If there's one touch I long to feel,
one voice I long to hear,
whenever I am happy,
or just needing someone near.

If there's one joy, one love,
from which I never want to part,
it's you, my very special love,
my world, my life, my heart.

Destor
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OMG, poetry...
I haven't done this since English class...

Well, I suppose it is time to begin.

I saw your face again
But it was so sad.
How is the world so harsh
When I remember the happiness

But now I look
Long into your eyes
Maybe it is the last time
How is the world so harsh
When I remember the love

As you turn to leave
Trying not to cry
I have to say something
Or this love will be lost
How is the world so harsh
When I remember your face

You are on the edge of my sight
And now I have almost lost you
I have to say one thing, before you leave
"I love you- Forever"

Oh how is the world so harsh
When our love never dies?


Ugh, I can make poetry up on the spot... But this was probably horrible. It would have gotten me a 100 though, all of my poems did in English. Because the only thing that mattered was the poem!

Two more, though!
Leaning against you
On your shoulder
Very comforting
Even Armor Games can wait for you.

Holding your warm hand
Sitting with you, my one love
I long to kiss you

First was a normal poem
Second was Acrostic
Third was Haiku.

So, what do you think? I know only one is allowed, so I will go with the first one, though I like my Haiku.

Lynoth
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Ack. All your poems are about actual, regular except mine!
But when is love "regular" anyway?

And I forgot the title to mine. It's called Mrs. Imaginary.

Aaroniscool
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Sry, my mind is trapped "in the box" can someone help me?

Drace
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Ok who deleted my post of the lyrics to Rick Astley's "Never gonna give you up"??

Zophia
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Ok who deleted my post of the lyrics to Rick Astley's "Never gonna give you up"??
It wasn't a legit entry, and took up enough space to be kind of spammy. So.
Esuna2400
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-Sighs-
Hmmm lemme think of something..

I have two say something four you.
It consists of three words.
I Love You

-Facepalm- Fail xD

Gantic
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I have two say something four you.
It consists of three words.
I Love You

-Facepalm- Fail xD


Plain White T's did it better in "1, 2, 3, 4".

But try harder. There are two weeks to go. The deadline is Valentine's Day.
slliM
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I might retry... you know... because my first entry sucked.

Aaroniscool
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E is for the way you direct your eye contact at me
V is for the only one I visualize with my eyes (that's you (no, not you) )
O is very very incredible and very awesome
L is even more than anyone that you love greatly

Evol Spelled backwards is me and you

Evol spelled backwards is me and you...

(repeat *sideways 8 symbol* times)

:P

Devoidless
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I wanna try! ^_^

I lay awake thinking of you,
Of all the memories we have,
We have right in my pad.

I roll over hoping to see you,
Reach out to caress your face,
Your face that I'll never forget.

Nothings there spare a trace of your scent,
Your perfume and shampoo lingering on my sheets,
My sheets you slept under only last night.

I get up to try and distract myself to no avail,
Everywhere I look brings me back to when you were here,
Were here in my arms and my life.

Right here on my bed is where we spent many a night,
Should of been sleeping but stayed awake,
Stayed awake and now your taste lingers on my lips.

I know you'll return before longer...you always do,
We have our seperate lives to live and own places to stay,
To stay so far apart yet keep so closely connected.

I'll keep on doing this every day until you return,
Waiting for you and watching for outside my window,
My window I last saw you from.
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There?

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