ForumsArt, Music, and WritingPeriodic Poetry Contest - Theme: Touch of Truth (Page 390, due Jan. 28)

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DragonMistress
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First, I will post the overall rules, and then I will post the specifics about this week.

Original rules, as stated by Ubertuna:

It must fit the week's theme.
It must be submitted by the deadline.
It cannot have inappropriate language in it.
It cannot be stolen (if you plagiarize, we will find you).


Also:

The poem must be created for this contest
A user cannot win two weeks in a row (though everyone is welcome to submit every week!)
Only one submission per user will be accepted

As we all know, the winner will recieve a merit, and their poem will be featured on the _Poetry_ page.


OK, on to this week's topic...Again, we are having a style instead of a theme. Also, this week we are having TWO WEEKS to do it, instead of the usual one. Why? Because this will be an EPIC poem. Or, rather, a parody of an epic poem. Generally, epic poetry is very long, and tells the serious story of a heroic figure. Well, this week, the epic figure is YOU! Write a long poem (I'll leave the definition of 'long' up to you, but give it a good go) about the heroic story of you! It can be silly, serious, whatever... just have fun with it. You have two weeks, so have a great time!
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MoonFairy
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Aha. I have one.

The emotional sea,
slowly kills,
by swallowing me.

Pulling me under,
as I reach the top,
As the sky continues to thunder.

Fury, depression, love, hate,
choke my heart,
till it's too late.

No one tried to save me,
they just watched me drown,
even though they could all see.

They saw how,
I needed help,
But it doesn't matter now.

Their sweet lies,
Muffled my screams,
No one could hear my terrified cries.

So here I will die,
Because I can't win the fight,
I wasn't strong enough to defy.

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TA FREAKIN DA. It doesn't seem place-worthy. But I tried. I had already made some of this poem before, but I changed it for the contest.

Parsat
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Didn't know what to write at first, until I thought of the end of summer and the situation I feel I'm in.

Times Never Change

When summer came in childhood days,
We became children of the sea.
One of those games we'd always play
Was tossing in a little key,
And waiting 'til it sank below:
Just waiting, waiting, waiting more
And wond'ring why it fell so slow,
Until, at last, it hit the floor.
Then we would fly from land to air,
And change to pencils, cannonballs.
From sunny sky to water fair,
We'd search along the blue-white walls,
Or down the middle to the deeps,
Sweeping left and sweeping right,
Drawing breath with quickish leaps,
Through a foggy goggle-sight.
And he or she who found the goal
Up close could simply snatch it quick;
But from afar, a stealthy role
Was needed to prevent their pick.
Oh! What a joy it was when I was young!
When keys I sought were literal,
When under waves I'd have some fun,
Not find it was subliminal.

But now I flounder in a sea
Of grown responsibility.

Zaork
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This is where the title goes
The poem is further down below

Listen closely and you'll hear
The cries of seamen from the pier
The noblemen who sacrificed
The very essence of their life
It is not a tale of woe
A mere warning from below

Each year the fleeting boats return
To the ocean to roil and churn
The feeble minds of commandeers
Leaves a taste of dying tears
Profit sought and profit gained
But none to use for none remained

Children left on the shore
Telling tales of grand rapport
Their fathers battling 'gainst the tide
For the purpose of some pride
The truth of which they will not learn
'till they surrender what they yearn

A parade leaves earthen land
Leaving past, present, sand
Hoping to glean of a time
Something past the threat of grime
For when they venture past the eye
There is not place to say goodbye

Floating on enclosed wood
Given the rights a coffin should
Surrender to the wroth of swell
Before the chiming of the bell
Marching, enveloped in the sea
Left with ambiguity

This is not a tale of woe
But a warning from below

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Hey give me a break, I'm sick. I tried to break free from my usual form. Comments and critiques are welcome as always.

Parsat
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If I am not mistaken, this Sunday (the 12th) will be judging. Any confirmation on that, alt?

thisisnotanalt
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I will, within almost absolute certainty, be able to get to it.

FallenSky
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within almost absolute certainty

I'm moderatly inclined to be very glad about that.

EnterOrion
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Nomad

I'm moderatly inclined to be very glad about that.


I'm moderately inclined to agree with you. Wholeheartedly.
wajor59
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I'm somewhat patiently awaiting alt's decision.(?)

Blackwolves990
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good poem dragon

FallenSky
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good poem dragon

What!?
Are you perhaps talking about Enter?

wolf1991
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Where be the judge?

Parsat
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In the land of Almost Absolute Certainty, of course.

Zaork
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Nomad

I am almost absolutely certain that he is not. Am I?

FallenSky
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In the land of Almost Absolute Certainty, of course.

Where else! I'm fairly inclined to be almost totally certain about 100% of 50% of that...

FallenSky
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It is my guess that Alt has died to the hands of *almost absolute certainty the third*; I heard he was quite a fearsome and talented fighter.
We will remember you as judgemaster Alt.
Unless you want us to write *he who loved pudding*, or something like that on your grave...

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