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Ok guys, this story has just been dancing in my head and i had to put it somewere. All ideas, and critasism is accepted. Thanks!
prologe.
"Malcom! Malcom! Wake up!" It was his mother yelling, he woke up covered in sweat. There was a odd light comeing from all around, and something that smelled of...smoke. He looked out window, expecting to see the sun riseing, as it allways does, instead he saw the royal army, of which he hoped to become one day, fighting back 3 dragons. There were huge, like nothing any one had ever seen. One, was pure white, with golden talons and teeth, and large golden spikes all down it's back and tail. The next was a blue dragon, Its spines on its head and the tip of its tail, were clear, looking allmost exactly like crystals. The biggest, who seemed to be the leader was twice as big as the others. It was jet black With Giant spikes covering his body, and it was breathing fire...on to every thing. Suddenly his mom burst into his room,"Malcome, what are you standing here for we have to get into the castle right away!" He ran after her, out of the front door and into the groups of people hurding into the inner castle. Once inside, the people spread around finding small grous of people they knew and talking, crouching in corners, and crying. Malcome, scanned the room quickly, seeing his best freind, and traning partner in knight school, ran over to him. he was allready with the rest of there gang. They were mercaniares of sorts, takeing on small jobs the army passed on to them. There were five of them in totall. Malcome, being the leader turned and said,"Guys, follow me". They went down the corridor to the right, unnoticed. There they could talk with out being unheard. There they were the whole gang. malcome, a Tall muscled boy with dirty blonde hair and freckles, who chose to fight with a double sided sword. King, who was his best freind, was short, and slighyly overweight, who was accustomed to fighting with a spear and a large sheild. Then another short kid who was very strong, had a thick head of red hair, he fought with a large battle ax, his name as brian. Then there was the one girl of the group, tall skinny with blonde hair. she could have done anything she wanted, but she decided to join there gang and help the community. She used a bow to fight, she was a very falubale member to the group, seeing as she could fight from range and all, her name was kailey. And last, the most unlikely membber of the bunch, a short skinny kid with large glasses constently sliding down the bridge of his nose. His name was vox. He was a mage, but his friends were the only ones who knew, for if the royal army knew of his rare, yet extremely usefull gift they would recruit him now.
I will continue that later if you guys like it. i am sleepy right now and cant think.
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"So what is the plan boss?" Malcome screwing up his face at the remark said "Brian I'm not your balls, I am a fiend."
lol hope u dun mind i just wanted to write stupid things like this
hey, Thanks for the feed back! I am not really sure why I changed the spelling, just sorta didn't notice. I am gonnna keep saying Malcome cause I am used to typying it that way.
"So what is the plan boss?" Malcome screwing up his face at the remark said "Brian I'm not your balls, I am a fiend."I thought you were gonna say I typed that for a second. lol
Tere it was at last, the door to the armory, locked with a rather impresive lock. " O dear, seemes as if we have run into a problem allready." " Nah, What would make you say a lock bigger then vox's brain would be a problem?" Brian said, then laughed stupidly at his own not funny joke. "Would you happen to know were we could find a key for this door your highness?" Kailey asked in the nicest voice possible. "Well, the door gaurds are on the battle feild now, Every guard except for a few here in the castle are there. There may be a way in somewere, they said they made an ecsacpe rought accecable from both sides in case of an emergancy." King spoke up," Did they tell you anything, leave any maps or something?" The queen thought for a second, but as she started to shake her head and was about to speak, Vox shouted out. "Here it is, heres the awnser we were looking for right here, on the door." In small writing carved into the thick wood of the door, there were small letters. "Vox, what do they say, come on just tell us allready!" Every one yelled, not wanting to waste any more time. "Ok ok, calm your selfs. It reads The treasure is mine alone, without light is were I hang, I watched you when you came in the room but did I see your comeing doom? "Worst riddle ever!" Brian complained, being completly ignored. Kailey and Vox went towards the enterance while King and Malcome went the other leaving the poor queen with Brian. They were all turning the riddle over in there heads, looking for something that hung, and was there when they entered. Kailey went over to a knight right next to the door, and turned it over causeing it to fall to peices. Inside she found A rope. "Every one! Over here look What I found!" Kailey yelled rather excitedly. "Ok, So it saw us when we came in he room, but it isnt hanging, or is it in the dark king thought out loud. "Wait," said the queen "I think I may know the awnser, follow me." She led them down to the end of the corridor, were there was an old light hanging, just as finly made and golden as the other, but this one wasn't light. " Thia may be what it talks of. This light has not light for ever. If a candle was placed in it, it would not light, so they gave up on it and left it hang here." the queen explained. " But there seems to be candles up there right now." Malcome said rather curiously." I wonder if we could get it down here using that rope?" Brian asked, Fianlly seeing the seriousness of every one else. "Its Worth a try I suppose" Kailey said, throwing it up to the light and catching part of it. "Ok Guys grab hiold of this and pull." They all brabed and tuged this way and that, and it fainally gave away. But instead of falling, it slowly came down, it was on some kind of mechanism, and laying on it was a bottle. " Hrm....seems to be a message" Vox said, as he took the bottle. "It says, The richest man to hang on these walls holds the way."
I will continue later. My fingers hurt from typing that, lol
well........no. I dont have firefox, and it takes a high speed conection which I dont have, and putting it into microsoft makes it all funny. Did i spell alot of stuff wrong or something?
Not a lot, but reading the first few sentences I can point out quite a few.
Well, I will addmit that my spelling is about as good as a 3rd graders. lol
oh this is good!
why thank you!
See, you just spelled admit wrong.
And you don't use capitals much.
ha, lol firetail just get over it and enjoy the story...OK?
man I feel like I need to go back to 3rd grade and learn to spell.
As for caps, I just dont send my finger down here thats all I just think more of the story not the caps.
True, but I think he needs to be more descriptive. In the beginning, he just went right into it.
ha, lol firetail just get over it and enjoy the story...OK?
lol, you sound like my teacher or something...
Nah, your just a person who needs to learn 3rd grade spelling! ROFL jk.
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