Forums → Art, Music, and Writing → Poem on Jealousy (by Crazynaitor)

that's rather sad):
i hate those people who go around stealing your best friend's love.

not that i had came through that but...,
well,that's a sad poem.

All that i could do now was to gawk in jealousy.
for all that I could do was to hide behind a tree.
mistake!!
it should be
"for i could only hide behind the tree"

Thats an alright poem Sherm I'd give it 8/10!

Great poem Crazy I have gotta say 9.5/10 from me only because its a first poem.

wow,thanks
never expected you people to give me such high rating!

Hmm...well....the whole idea of still thinking a girl is beautiful after what they do to you is common...because although feelings for someone change, their appearance doesn't....

For example, I still think the girl that dumped me for my friend is beautiful, and now that I have forgiven her, we can still be friends...although I still have some feelings of animosity (you know...I hope that word can be used in this context) towards them (her and my friend)...

Jealousy is a strange thing,
It enraptures us to no end.
It hurts us and burns us,
And then only for ourselves we can fend...

hmm
if you would simplify it,
jealousy sucks us into a eternal void of no end,
hurt and burns us
where we can only fend for ourself?

jealousy always gives me the feeling of sour-ness in your heart.
at times when i feel jealous,my heart beats irregularly.

anyways, KR
how old are you?
well,considering my age,i shouldn't go into a relationship.which i dun have anyway.lol