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Qwerty001
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I made this poem for my about... tell me if you like it!

An Ode To Me:
If I were an album I'd be solid gold;
If I were an burger I'd be billions sold;
If I were an movie I'd be 2 thumbs up;
If I were an sports team I'd win the world cup;
If I were an novel I'd be best seller;
If I were a planet I'd be voted most stellar;
If I were a paper I'd be most quoted;
If I were a song I'd be most downloaded;
If I were a fat kid I'd be most bloated;
If I were a network I'd be number one;
If I were a comedian I'd never tell a bad pun;
I am the best- now this poem is done!

Written by Qwerty001

If you put this in your about tell everyone Qwerty001 wrote this...

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Cenere
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I have to say that it is more than quite nice!
It got a nice flow to it, and the rhyming is done well!

Good darn job!

Ricador
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Wow, you did an amazing job XD

Great rhyming and flow, 11/10

masta_cheef
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That's pretty good dude. Would've liked it if it was longer because it's really good and it's got rythym.

Ernie15
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The second to last line didn't quite have the right rhythm, but other than that, that's a pretty good poem.

Qwerty001
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Gee thanks everyone! I didn't think it was that good but with all the postive reviews I might get into poetry!

random_player_of_ag
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An awesome poem.

You have quite an imagination there.

11/10.

I have it on my profile.

But with your name as the creator

thoadthetoad
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HAH, this is the most narcissistic poem I've ever heard...I LOVE IT! I'm badgering one of my friends to put it in his signature of DA, it suits him so well :'D lol.

crispym
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nice poem you written there nice rhyming nice choice of words and a good rythm. overall a good job!

Qwerty001
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Thanks guys!

I might add on just for you guys (and girls)

Qwerty001
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Thinking about adding on to this...

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