Ok I've written this story and posted it in the writing section. Can people please view and critique it? Im not sure if this is legal on armor games...
Well you've already posted your story at the art section and that's the place for reviewing. I understand you want to know other people's opinion though.
All artists and authors in the art section want some kind of knowledge of their works, but really, most people in the Tavern does not care. At all. They are here for the cheap laughs and small posts (no offence, but most are), while the other artists and writers will comment if they see fit to do so. There is usually just two things to do. Make a series of text, or make a thread for your personal works, and people will become curious after some time, and if you do a good job (I have read your work, and you do a good job), people will come back. It does not really help to make a thread here, as people are going tl;dr on most posts over three sentences (or less).
