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klint26
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Peasant

The story:in 2101 the heat wave struck. The waters of the earth disappeared and living things started to die. In desperation the people of the world went underground were they found water and food and strange creatures never seen before. For the most part they left the humans alone but when 2154 dawned the monsters became more aggressive. The USP (underground secret police) have been fighting them for weeks but there seems to be no end to the monsters.

Were you come in: you are a young cadet that just graduated from the USP training program. You are picked for the quest of finding the cause of the problem.
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(character sheet)
Name:
Weapon:
Armor:
Exp:0/1
Str:1
Max hit:
Hp:10/10
Inventory: field rations x1
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All items are obtained through the game.
Only one person!
Oh and this is my first RPG.

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Bug_Virus_Of_Olympus
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Nomad

Name: Bug Virus (of Taltura(city in the future))
Weapon:x-11 lightning sword, lightning baton
Armor: Flak Vest covered with a black fur cloak
Exp:2/3
Lvl: 3
Str:12
Def:7
Max hit:
Hp:30/30
Inventory: field rations x1

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klint26
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Peasant

b]Bug[/b]

The locks creak open and the gem starts to hum. You take the gem outside and the gem starts floating higher and higher. you jump and grab hold of it! It shoots off in the direction of the city. 5 mins later you crash through the elders throne room (thats how fast you were flying!)
The elders jump out of there seats as the gem stops in the middle of the room. You fall off the gem exhausted (that was the longest 5 minutes in you life)! the gem turns green and starts to spin... faster and faster then it shoots a green light and the cave turns green for a split second and you black out. You wake up in your bed at your house with the head elder sitting in a chair in the corner of the room. He gets up and walks to you he says ''The monsters are dead, the crystal was their life force. They found the crystal at the mountain and used it to become immortal, thats why there was so many of them when we killed them, their body died but not the soul so they came back as another monster. You have done taltura, our black haven a great favor
we are forever in your debt.
THE END

Rate! and tell me how i could have made this better!

Bug_Virus_Of_Olympus
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Nomad

Maybe a little more items could have been found and bought, wait what happened to Jezz's character, do I just get all the glory and she is wandering around the battlefields some where? That's hilarious!

klint26
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Peasant

no she still has to finish

jezz
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Farmer

whoa oh my god!
aww that was too short.
gahh i think im now forever doomed to wander the vast plains of ______(wherever) with little Jimi who never got the chance to grow up.
and for that reason i rate it low >:0 grrrr

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