Since thisnotalt( pretty sure I got the spelling wrong) suggested it, I think I will create a thread just to post my stories. Ok now to find them... *Digs deep into the AMW Section to find his stories*
Wow! You have a lot of talent! I can compare your short stories to ones in other books, and your stories could fit right in with them! Your stories are those of a seasoned author, except for a few things, like some adjectives... and sometimes a sentence goes a bit too long. But other than that, this is professional writing!
Oh, and I can't wait for GA II! *sorry for spamming, I could have put it on the last post* There isn't any pressure on you though, man. Take your time.
Yes, these are all great. Some of the adjectives in GA are a bit clumsy, sort of like small bumps in the road, but still, to go by rating, GA gets a 9.5/10!