Hello everyone, ive recently began to write rather disturbing stories and poems, and I just want there to be a section where myself [and others] can share there pleasant stories here too!
ok ill post one now
~~The liquid trickled down his throat as it saturated his senses. He then died. The wind blew against his dead body and spread the fowl smell of fecal matter into the moist air. A murder of crows then proceded to feast on his insides, spilling frozen blood and intestines everywhere. A baby then crawled outside onto to the porch and saw the remains of his brother, now splattered on the patio and windows. The darkest crow, though all those crows were dark, grabbed the baby, ripped its face off, and threw it so far into the dark abysmal that not even satan could feast on it. The sun began to rise, it was a brand new day. The child awoke from a deep slumber, sweating and panting. It was only a dream, he thought. He then touched his neck and felt a liquid drip down. THE END.
On a night like any normal night. There was a boy named Derrick Forman and his girlfriend named Haley Ward. They were at the park talking about school and listening to there radio when they heard a guy talking about a mass murderer running around the city (New York City). Haley said âI am a little scared, can you take me home.â Derrick then said âdonât worry about it, people say stupid stuff to scare you. But I will if you want.â The next day at school Derrick is talking to his friends and making fun of the mass murderer running around. Haley hears him and says âYou really shouldnât be talking about him, he could be watching.â Derrick then bursts out laughing and told Haley not to worry about it. Later that night Derrick was getting ready for bed when he heard a noise outside his window. He then got worried. He got out his baseball bat when all of a sudden BAM!!!!....
On a night like any normal night. There was a boy named Derrick Forman and his girlfriend named Haley Ward. They were at the park talking about school and listening to the radio when they heard a guy talking about a secret mass murderer running around the city (New York City). Haley said "I am a little scared, can you take me home." Derrick then said "don't worry about it, people say stupid stuff to scare you. But I will if you want." The next day at school Derrick is talking to his friends and making jokes about the mass murderer. Haley hears him and says "you really shouldn't be talking about him, he could be watching." Derrick then bursts out laughing and told Haley not to worry about it. Later that night Derrick was getting ready for bed and when he heard a noise outside the window. He then got worried. He got out his baseball bat when all of a sudden BAM!!!...
The little tottlers were playing a lil game of tag with their friends. It was 'orribley fun and exciting! Then one kid swung a closet door open to hide, and something fell out, they all screamed, but calmed down to see it was just an empty costume from the recent school play.
SCENE 2.
They laughed in glee as they picked it up to try it on. Dozens of rotting babies fell out. Maggots crawled in and out of their fecal brains, as the children screamed in horror. Then a murder of crows crashed through the windows, and tore off the babies flesh and mutilated there insides until the children were splatered with guts.
SCENE 3
Then, Angelina Jolie popped out of an adjacent closet and asked if the babies were for sale. Madonna jumped at her with a boozoka, and accidently pressed the self destruct button blowing up the whole school. The children lay there, lifeless, except one lil child. It was barely alive, it twiched his hand. He had been spared! Then Satan himself appeared from the ground and stomped on his head and crushed his skull.
sorry for the double post but i forgot to add a disclaimer, lol.
****DISCLAIMER: I, jalex13, am not responsible for the loss of will to live after reading my story due to the fact of you being dumb enough to read it. I in no way, am Satan. (sorry i had to add that)****
Course not, but dude you're giving yourself way too much credit.
Also, if you were satan I'm glad that I'm gonna take over the earth when I'm older, daddy!
As for your play... thing, It's....kinda cruddy. Makes no sense and it's just random gore flying up. It has no plot whatsoever. I mean really, angelina jolie and random crows mutilating insides of maggot babies? That's just retarded. not even entertaining to me :P
You know how low thoad's standards for entertainment are?
cold, I actually have high standards for entertainment, but the only person that would find that even interesting would be a person who loves fred.
jalex, if you're gonna try being emo, really try hard. Think of everything that has made you burst into tears, and anything that could. THink of your mother being taken away on a slave ship, think of your father being put in a gas chamber for raping a neighboor, think of anything that could cause you misery and put it down on paper in a different story. That, is a depressing story.
oh well im done with being depressed. im going back to my sick, messed up, disturbing slef.
I wouldn't say sick messed up or even disturbing. No offense dude but it's pretty much like madness series with you. Mindless violence. Plus you re-use a lot of your stuff, demon's, celebrities, crows, and babies. It's stale.
a monkey strapped onto to a piece of plankton crashed into a shark who then got mad and bit a cats arm off. the cat went crazy and kidnapped a witch and held it hostage. The witch got pissed and turned the world into a turkey sandwich, which god then ate, and pooped out what we now call today Britney Spears.
