/Warning: If you do not want to hear my honest opinion do not read. Yes. I am sure you want to get the feeling of something without a real shape, or being really light and... ghosty, but due to the use of rather heavy lines too, especially the black ones, it end up looking clumsily done. Either one or another, you cannot have something light/smudgy with heavy lines too. Unless done with expert skills. Besides that, you would most likely improve a lot the moment you learn the basics of anatomy. /Warning/
Really good gooz! You spent a lot of time on that one!.... But I see something weird. Is it just me or is a lightning bolt coming out of the yellow deer's butt?