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Shadowphoenix39
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In case you don't know... I am Phoenix. I have writer's block (As usual). I can't write a story very well on my free will. So, I will get people to give me a pretty specific topic to write a story about. I just can't write romantic stories... don't ask. The first story some one posts will be the one I write about. Please don't post more topics while I already had one suggested. (Unless I disapprove of the topic) It will take me a few days for each story, I am busy with end of the school year stuff.

~*~Phoenix~*~

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jezz
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-Phoenix with tears that possess healing powers.
-Split personality, with a medusa as her 'demon'.
-Totally unsane.
-British


Heh thanks Nich, nice description ^^
Yes typically British, deep blue eyes im fond of (about the only part of myself im fond of).
AG persona:
-a golden-orange phoenix
-stands about 4 foot tall
-tears constantly running down my cheeks
-rather scatty personality
-perhaps drawn with wings spread?
-occasionally seen as/with a towering giant female medusa with glowing red eyes and green and black snakes for hair. Goes by the name of Skye. (the "split personality&quot

Thankyou so much Cen!
Don't feel rushed to draw, and I don't care how it looks so long as it roughly resembles what Nich and I described.
:3
nichodemus
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Glad to be of some help Jezz...but yes...thanks Cen for all your efforts, past, present and future.

jezz
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Note:
I think Skye is more of a Gorgon than a Medusa.

thisisnotanalt
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Medusa was a gorgon :P

nichodemus
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Well Shadow...Any teasers coming along? You don't need to confirm everyone to actually start writing...

jezz
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Medusa was a gorgon :P

Eghh darn!
I feel horrible now.
Still, depict her like the pic kaythxz ^^
Shadowphoenix39
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Well Shadow...Any teasers coming along? You don't need to confirm everyone to actually start writing...


My eye began to burn. That is what swept me back into reality, I was running, sweating. A black blur was chasing me. Had the police gone mad? Or was it us? I couldn't remember. Perhaps I was drunk? After all, it was the tavern. I ran into a table spilling dragon eggs onto the ground, a few figures glared at me as the eggs smashed on the hard, wooden floor. I was doing so much thinking, everything appeared to be in slow motion. A jumped on a table covered with newspapers, leaped from that one to another surrounded by people shouting, "Chuck Norris!" I saw a dragon burst through the door, I quickly turned around, I hit the figure with the flail I forgot I ha been carrying. The iron orb slammed the guard and sent them flying. Then table got hot, it was on fire! Devoidless, the dragon had nearly engulfed me in flames before I bounded off the singed table and landed on his head, which he shook furiously. I slid down his back and resumed my running. I was going to make ih-<BLAM>!

Headache today... Couldn't be as descriptive and long as I hoped but I guess this fits the bill.
jezz
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Niiiice....

I like the references!
It seems a little... crammed in.
Perhaps take time to explain/describe the place/person/animal more. But otherwise, nice!
I didn't like the Chuck Norris bit at all. :S
He ruins everything.
I liked the Dragons Eggs.

Shadowphoenix39
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Agh... Perhaps I could refine it tomorrow... When my head doesn't hurt.

Ima take a nap now...

jezz
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Kay sure.
It's still good though.
Don't forget to post tomorrow!

Shadowphoenix39
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Wait... Jezz... Your a bird? I thought that you were human... I have a rough draft of the first entry done... You are presented sitting on a stool. (XD) So you want to be described as a bird?

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yo, phoenix! can my textified alter ego, avicus, and I, a talking manta ray, be in the story? or are all the parts taken? I'll accept the group of hermits or travelers for all i care.

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Are any places empty?

jezz
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No no, Phoenix, describe me how you like. I don't mind
If im a human, make sure you include im a girl and i have blue eyes

Shadowphoenix39
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One character per user, more than one is unfair.

Narrator - Shadowphoenix39

Jail Warden/Watcher (Mod) - Strop

Cell Mate - Jezz

Cell Mate 2: Thisisnotanalt

Guard - Devoidless

Wizard - Nichodemus

Group of Hermits/Adventurers - the manta, ???, ???

Bounty Hunter - Bluydee

Guy Who Gives Advice - ???


Half done second entry... I want this one to be really good...
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