Well Im writing a love song for the FIRST time and this is the only part I wrote. If you have any suggestions or if your a guitar pro and know any chords to put, all help is appreciated.
Verse 1a That first day of school, I couldn't take my eyes off of you, I thought I saw an angel, I wanted to be with you.
Hmm...well I don't write love songs, so can't help you there.
But can you play the piano? It seems like love type songs sound better on there, and not as cheesy, lol. Unless you're going to make it like a hard rock love song, which would be sweet.
For some reason though, I'm imagining a guy with a straw hat and and old acoustic guitar.
just a tip man, try to stay away from saying the same words after 1 verse
Thanks. Ill be on the look out for those.
But can you play the piano? It seems like love type songs sound better on there, and not as cheesy, lol. Unless you're going to make it like a hard rock love song, which would be sweet.
Well I plan on making it a normal love song since I never made a song in my life :P
For some reason though, I'm imagining a guy with a straw hat and and old acoustic guitar.
I haven't really edited any of this so here is the original.
Verse 1a That first day of school, I couldn't take my eyes off of you, I thought I saw an angel, I wanted to be with you.
Verse 1b I didn't know you, You didn't know me, All I did know, was I wanted to be with you.
Chorus: I love you, I always want to be with you, I never thought love at first sight was real, Until i met you...
Now I now some of this doesn't rhyme but I just wrote it down and didn't make any changes. Just need some feedback and hopefully get this song done :] Thanks for the help.
