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This is a place I like to call my think-tank. I use this thread to record all of my ideas for artwork, stories and such. I welcome any and all opinions and criticism on my ideas, and based on them, I will try to bring the ideas to life. If you have problems pertaining to religion, morals, etc. with any of the items that I post on this thread, please try to ignore them rather than posting a comment saying that it is against your religion, moral code, etc. Please regard the rules that follow with your utmost respect-

>Thread Rules<

1. No spamming

2. No Flaming

3. No disrespecting of other users in any way.

4. No disrespect to me, because I'm sure that I wouldn't disrespect you.

5. Try to be polite.

6. No comments under one sentence in length. Those will be flagged.

7. Please ask me before advertising anything here.

8. No stealing of artwork, story ideas, etc. I will report you to a mod.

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10. Please ask me before flagging a post, so that I can determine if it is flag-worthy.

11. Obey the rules.

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Maverick4
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gonna go write my story now...

just wat to call the thread...

Pois0nArr0w
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You should color land & water.


Will color land and water, but that's what the X's and labels were for.
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Story tiem nao!

The Life and Times of Frank

-A story by Aaron Palmer-

Prologue

December 7
Ship's Log, Entry One-

This is Aron Briggs, captain of the skyship Poison.

My first day on the ship, and things are horrible. There's rips in the fins, gas leaks in the hull, and the gearbox don't work! Atleast things can't get worse.
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December 10
Ship's Log, Entry Two-

The crew needs training. They don't even know how to work the fins, let alone even turn the tiller! I must be captain of the worst ship in the world.
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December 16

Ship's Log, Entry Three-

We've been working on the ship for near a week, now. The fins are fixed, the leaks in the hull have been sealed, and we found out what was wrong with the gearbox- there was a dead fowl caught in between two of the gears. This ship just might be sky-worthy.
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It was ten o' clock when the captain put his pencil down, a smile growing across his face. The ship would be ready to fly by morning, and he would be the one to lead her.

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"Hurry up!" cried a boy as he reached the skyship docked in the harbor.
"Oh dear, Frank. How do you move so fast? I can hardly keep up." An elderly woman staggered over to the boy, breathing hard. "That's 'cause your an old lady, Grandma. You got muscles like worn out leather." answered the boy, chuckling to himself. "Well," exclaimed the woman, "that's no way to talk to your leathery, old grandmother, is it? Now, then, come along. I've got some shopping to do, and I need to get you back to your mother."
"Okay, grandma," he said with a sigh, "can we come back to the harbor tomorrow?" The woman looked down and smiled at her grandson. "Well, I have to go meet your grandfather at his work tomorrow. Why don't you ask your mother?" At this, the boy gave another sigh. "Mum wont take me. She's usually busy cleaning and cooking and doing other things."
"Oh? Well, maybe we can come back next week. Come along, now, Frank. Let's get you home." The woman started walking down towards the cluster of buildings where she and her grandson lived. The boy gave one last look at the skyship and followed his grandmother, all the while thinking about when he would visit next.
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Typed it on WordPad, so there shouldn't be any wierd symbols.
Pois0nArr0w
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Hm... Nobody seems interested in the story... Oh well. Next chapter tomorrow or Monday.

MagiX
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Here's that sig you wanted. =)

http://i495.photobucket.com/albums/rr313/LineMagiX/Pois0n.png

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Ok,time to pull 'er back up with some art! I recently created a file on DoInk, and this is what I got done within the eight or so hours of my membership.

Put Your happy face on!
http://www.doink.com/clips/Poison/374499

*happy face*


Stick vs. Trashcan
http://www.doink.com/clips/Poison/374136

This is why you should recycle.


Oops...
http://www.doink.com/clips/Poison/374027

lulz? Just a little Halo sketch.

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I bet none of these image links work.

Pois0nArr0w
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I knew it! Just right click the URL and go to view image. It should take you right to them.

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Wow, it's liek, the same date as the last post, but a month later. Imma add some stories 'n stuff tomorrow, if anybody cares :P

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Wow, Poison. You nailed it perfectly on the dot a month later. Nice timing. Can't wait for teh stories.

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I know! I was just gonna go dig this up and post the above, but then I looked at teh clock on my laptop and it said 11:20. Soz I posted it then :P And now... I dunno. Crap, I was off topic in my own thread!

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Also, just fer people who care, all(2) of the stories I have posted here on AG have contained no dialogue whatsoever. I might be a little not-so-good at writing stories with dialogue, so be warned. Your eyes may very well bleed right out of their sockets.

MagiX
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*goggles*

Carry on.

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But will that save you from my onslaught of descriptive paragraphs? Also, if you wanna read the two stories I've written previously, go to my page and look under Short Stories, or wait a few minutes. I'm gonna go get sumthin to feed yall peeplz eyes.

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Here they iz!

The End

I was awake, but I thought I had walked into a dream. I was lying on the ground, covered with dirt and sweat. I tried to stand up, but my legs weren't strong enough to hold me. I fell back with a startled grunt, my chest heaving, my lungs feeding greedily on the stale oxygen in the room.
I rested there for a while, on the ground, collecting my breath, when I noticed the sign above the door. It read E.R. So I was in a hospital, but why, I did not know. It was then that I noticed the syringe attatched to my arm, and the red fluid inside. I pulled out the needle, and my arm went numb with pain. It fell to the floor, sending a wave of agony up the appendage and through to my spine.
My second attempt at getting up was more successful.
I staggered over to the door and stumbled with the doorknob, cursing my lame arm. I finaly opened the door and got over to the attendants desk, but the attendant wasn't there. I checked all the other rooms in the hospital, but they were all vacant. I gave a sigh of discontent, wondering where everyone could have gone.
I walked over to the main entrance, and nearly fell over again with surprise. All that lay before me was a wasteland. Cars overturned, whole buildings colapsed, destruction as far as the eye could see. I walked along the empty streets, my gaze falling over all of the deserted homes, the destroyed buildings, all the while wondering how this could have happened.
After the first month of traveling, I came to the conclusion that I might be the only one left. I knew I was alone in the world, the last of my kind. I fell down on my knees, the weight of the sadness that had welled up inside of me too much to bear any longer. I had decided to end this miserable existance once and for all. I carved on makeshift gallows a poem, my final words before I departed from this world.


Here I hang, overcome,
By sadness grief and sorrow.
And here I'll hang, 'til Kingdom Come,
Wishing for a better 'morrow.

Written by Pois0nArr0w
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An Answering Call

Death was the first thing I felt. Or, was it the pain? The sharp, searing agony that one might feel if he were to be run through with a stake. Yes, I believe it was the pain I first felt, but almost instantly, I was overwhelmed by a flood of darkness, nearly chilling me to my very core. This, I believe, was what killed me, not the fear, not the pain, no, but Death itself. It took me into the folds of its dark, haunting robes, and brought me here, to where I am now. I stand before a seemingly endless plain of tall, pale yellow grass. I look up to find no sun or moon, only a dark, menacing blanket of the deepest black. My gaze falls on everything around me, but it is like looking at a photograph, silent and unchanging. As I gaze, I think that surely this must be Hell. Suddenly, all thoughts in my head are pushed aside by something Man has known all of his life; primal fear.
All rationality is lost to me, perhaps even gone forever, as I run for my very life, if I still have one in this dark, abysmal plain. What I am running from exactly, not even I fully know. All I heard was a sharp, broken, high-pitched howl, and all I sensed was my own fear. This howl could have belonged to anyone, or anything, perhaps a demon, a Hellhound, or even the Devil Lucifer himself. As I ran, I stooped lower and lower, until I was leaping over the terrain like a wild animal, pushing off with my legs, landing on bent arms.
Then, the first changes started taking place. My ears grew elongated, tapering to a point. My jaw began to extend, stretching my skin until it was ripped from my skull. My hands and feet became bony, skeletal paws. I was doubled over in pain, my mind blank as to why this might be happening. When the changes were complete, I no longer resembled myself. I was, I am, a horrid creature, no more a man than a rock might be alive. I resemble now a skeletal hound, all bone and ligament, my flesh torn from my bony frame. I still hear those menacing howls, yet, they do not frighten me anymore. The calls seem welcoming, almost friendly. Sometimes, even I start to howl, and always, there is an answering call.


-Pois0nArr0w
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I think An Answering Call was a bit too fast paced. Maybe I edit tomorrow and post with other two shorts I'm writing.

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*Cough*

Oh. lewk! My magic cough brought it to the front page!

I'm gonna take a wild guess & say that your two other shorts are cancelled, yes?

I want to see them. Those stories right there are good.

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Oh, ok. I didn't see this on the front page... Huh. Well, the other two stories are... Gone :P

My brother got pissed at me so he deleted pretty much all of my works in progress, which included the two I said I would post. Still haven't gotten to rewriting. Been busy with other stuff.
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I was just reading The End, when I started to notice something. I used the word ' I ' way too much :P

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