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jezz
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Sorry everyone, I thought it was about time I put everything about me here, in this thread. By that I mean everything i've written and ever will write.
I've recently realised that the only creative talent I have is being an okay writer. I would definately not say I'm very good, but I enjoy it and seem to have a knack for it.

So i'll post anything i've done here, be it written stories, poems, lyrics, doodles, etc.

First few works'll be posted in a sec. I'd love to hear your feedback, and if you'll would kindly not post your own works in here, thanks?

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Pazx
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What about Pazx? Or is she...he.. a guy.. still...


I'm not part of the Art forums family, sadly.
kingryan
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I'm not part of the Art forums family, sadly.


Yes you are...sort of...

You were part of Cen's thing...
Pazx
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You were part of Cen's thing...


What thing?

See? I don't belong here...
the_manta
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hey, Jezz.
Hey, Jezz.
Hey, Jezz.
Hey, Jezz.

Hi.


got any new stories in... er... store?

dudeguy45
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Jezz.....could you tell me how i could post pics on a post? I have some things for my thread.

Pazx
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First dudeguy, get the URL of the image. Then, click the image button and paste in the link, or put at the front of the URL and at the back.

PS Jess, this is great!

sonam
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You were part of Cen's thing...


I was gonna say something about this but since its pazx, i wont.

This info is quite a lot and i have only read a few works. i might read the rest later
Pazx
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I was gonna say something about this but since its pazx, i wont.


Say it, I'm kinda hoping it's not what I'm thinking.
dudeguy45
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Suppose it is just a scan?

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It's sonam saying this. . .it prolly is what you're thinking > >

jezz
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~Nacho's luurrvvee poem~

Soft scarlet feathers sweep my face,
Burn marks leave their subtle trace.
Scion of a long revered race,
Tempting my longing gaze.

Watching I greedily drink in the scene,
Nothing but a silent blurry dream.
Majestic wings sweep the air,
Guardians of a mighty Kingâs heir.

Glowing crimson as the cinders.
Nothing moves as my body splinters.
My pulse quickens madly,
Yet she flies, taunting me.

The torrent of beautiful song,
Swept me powerlessly along.
A piercing cry of passion,
Left my complexion pale and ashen.

Mesmerized by a sparkling orange blaze,
I stare on completely unfazed.
Her triumphant conquest a success,
Teasing me callously all in jest.

A magnificent golden plume,
Letting of a smoky pleasant fume.
Her tail caressed my hair,
Worries vanished without a care.

An eagleâs piercing eye,
Scanning the flamingo pink skies.
Bright cobalt they spear my bleeding heart,
The vulnerable flesh they tear apart.

A chiseled bronze beak,
The work of the Hands of Greeks.
Serrated iron claws rake my flesh,
Ripping a stinging open gash.

Robbing me of my speech,
On my knees I beseech.
The Cure I badly need,
Hastened here with all my speed.

Vanishing with a fiery twist.
A glittery descending mist.
A graceful outline flying,
The world merely her plaything.

A single droplet fell,
Halting the inevitable death knell.
Fracturing and shattering my ****ation,
Long constraining lifeâs animation.

She has given me my salvation,
Outstripping my desperate expectations.
Mistress of healing and rebirth,
Laughing in joy and mirth.

Her fiery eyes lock on mine,
In this Garden of Eden we shall dine.
Hearken, my bliss overflows,
A bright aura warmly glows.

My senses awaken from deep slumber,
Grateful of the miracle from her.
Now my tears flow as I cry.
A phoenix and I.


~Nacho's luurrvvee poem~

I'm sorry, I just HAD to.
It made me chuckle xD

But in a seriousness, the poem is really really good ^^

I've got a few things to post in a bit..
Do you think i should post my WoM sheet here too?
And i've got my phoenix decription to finish.

OH and i see spammy spam.. -_-'
the_manta
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Spam doesn't exist in the AMW section.
...for the most part.

but that's a great poem...

dudeguy45
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Funny. Manta! When are you gonna make your thread?

Pazx
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~Nacho's luurrvvee poem~


Oh, so you haven't seen the real love poem? Aww... You'd be all over him~

We want WaoMod sheet!
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Funny. Manta! When are you gonna make your thread?


:O I've been too busy with the WoM...

to answer your question...
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Nao.
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