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the__vampire
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this is the story im writing hope u like it please no spamming and comment if u want to


Black Moon

Chapter one

It all started on Friday the 13th.It was cool outside so I had a long sleeved shirt on as much of every one else probably had on at Warren County High. The school day had just begun and I was already bored. I was sitting in my assigned seat in homeroom. That was when Lucas possibly my best friend since we were toddlers came up and said âAre you sure about going to the cave tonight.â

One of my friends Lance dared me and Lucas to go to the supposedly haunted cave in the woods by are town McMinnville. The legend was that vampires had once lived there and dragged their victims into the cave then sucked their blood. Also they said there was still a group of vampires that lived there and if you were lucky they would turn you into a vampire instead of killing you. Once there was a young child kidnapped and they searched the cave after three fays through the search, and the cave walls where stained with fresh blood. They couldnât recognize the boy so the coffin was closed during the funeral.

RRRIIINNNGGG! Lunch. One of the only times we get to talk to friends and sit where we want freely. I went down the aisle where I got my food. I had a corndog and some fries. I sat down at the table where everyone else was. I sat on a table with my friends they are: Kaimen, Lucas, Chase, Blake, and Esau. We talk about movies P.E. and other stuff. Kaimen walks up and sits down and said, âSo whatâs on the agenda today.â Blake said in a excited voice âI think that we are playing dodge ball today in gym.â Dodge ball one of the best games we ever play in gym. So the rules are you get hit your out you score on the other teams basket ball hoop your team wins. I have occasionally scored and won for the team but not many times.

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the__vampire
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oops sorry didnt read the rules wont post the story again. so heres the link

http://the-vampire.webs.com/

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oops sorry didnt read the rules wont post the story again. so heres the link


You did nothing wrong in posting the story, but for the strange symbols to disappear you have to copy and paste into notepad and retype all of the "s and 's.
the__vampire
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i noticed the strange symbols i dont no what happened there

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Actually, you can just use the text box. You don't need notepad. Just a tip. Not a bad story though.

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this is chapter 2 hope u like it

The Black moon


Chapter 2



After lunch and Gym we were walking across the bridge back to the main building when something caught my eye.It was a person tall,and short hair standing in the distance staring at us. From what I saw I guessed it was a guy.When I turned my head to Lucas and said "Do you see that," "What,"he replied. When I turned my head there was nothing there. "Oh nothing must have been my eyes playing tricks on me." Then Blake walked up to us and said "So you guys are realy going to do it ?" We both said at the same time "Yea." Then with a sneer he said "It's been nice nowing ya guys" Lucas punched his arm and said "Stop being a jerk Blake." So Black said with a shrug "Hey its not my fault you guys are going to get your blood sucked."

Once i got home and eaten supper i got on the computer ,and like always started playing Pawn Tactics a free multiplayer internet shooter. My brother Nick walked up to me and said "So you going to the haunted cave tommarow?" So I looked at him and said "I guess I cant refuse a dare they will make fun of us untill i die why do you ask?" He looked at what i was playing and said "Just asking not like you and Lucas are gonna get eaten." He left and I played Pawn for a bit then went to bed and awaited the big day.

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