Now this story is based upon a dream I had about me and me freind Faye (Girl) Are good force (Notall of it) fighting the bade force no i'll begin my story
Chapter 1 Remember?
"I still remember how the war began." "Countless days of fighting when suddenly it happend." "But... lets start from the beging shall we." "Haha." (Evil laugh)
Chapter 2 The Begging
*Horse sound in village* *Swords clashing* "Mummy! Daddy!" Shouts the 2 twins *Women runs over with a man* "Mummy, Daddy" the children said relaxed and happy to see them "We have to go come on." As they where running from the battle a skelton soilder on his horse came up and killed both parents. As he spoted the children the had alreday ran to safetey. "What are we going to do now?" Ask the girl twin to her brother. "We will have to go and find saftey in another village." replied the boy twin. As the where working something grabed the girl twins legg and pulled her towards it. "Thomas!!" Screamed the girl twin to her brother. He spun round to find his twin sister being pulled towards the leader of the enemy army, his name was... Shadowyster "Faye!!" He shouted back and ran over to help his sister.But fleeing warriors from the battle picked up the little boy named Thomas and carryed him away. "F..Faye!!" That was his last to her.
Chapter 3 Traning
(10 years later) *Swords clashing* "Haha good fight." Said a boy with a weapon to a man "Yes very good you have good young skills for a boy." "Thank you sir." He replied gracefully back. *Rumble Rumble* "What was that lookout?" "Oh no it can't be!" "What is it." "Its its shadowysters son and part of his army." "Men get you pladain armor on and get your weapons!" *Everyone gets reday and gos outside for the fight* "Charge!!!" *Sowrds clashing* As the young boy name Thomas is fighting he looks up and sees something black in the sky "Faye!!" The black figure looks down and sees Thomas. She lands right infront and says Hello brother then flys off to Shadowysters son. Thomas looks over to where faye went and seen something fall off Shadowysters son. "Faye!!!! Noooooo!!" He ran over and jumped on shadowysters son as he got half way to his head he swaped his blade to kings blade and was confronted from behind by 2 enemeys. he turned round and slashed the enemys to peices then he ran up to the head of shadowysters son and got his kings blade and slade it off. Shadowysters son let out a terrible cry and fell to death. Thomas jumped off. With the undead troops seeing there leader dead they all fled the battle. The troops from the good force the paladians made a deep hole and put the 30 bodys (Including Fayes) down there
Chapter 4 Revived intime to finish
(2 Days Later) "Why did she have to join em she would'nt be dead if she did'nt." As Thomas was about to walk away from his sisters dead body something grabbed his arm. He looked to faye to see that she was not dead and was just Unconshis. They where talking alot when Faye said "I guess it is time I turned back to normal" Thomas asked her what she ment and Faye told Thomas about there past in a flash she changed intoa girl Paladian with 2 weapons. Thomas pulled Faye up and said "Its time to finish this fight." Faye told Thomas the things about Shadowyster and they snook into his palace. Countless guards spoted them and countless guards where defeated then finally they found him they found Shadowyster "Your rain of terror to the world of ood is over Shadowyster!" "Ahh Thomas&Faye the 2 most powerful humans in all over." "W...W...What!?" "You heared you 2 are the most pwoerful humans all over the land." "But how do you know that." "Because I'm your Uncle!" "Family or No Family where takeing you down!" "Prepare to meet your final death!" The battle raged on for hours but eventlly our heros came out on top and deafted him. "It's over." "We Defated him." Many battles of undead and paladin and otr god froces where being held but all the undead dsappered thought the world. As they left his palace everyone was celbrating them thanking them for all they have done.
Chapter 5 The End?
And even I congrtaulated them until a new enemy rose but I won't spoil it for you I will tell you when you are reday to hear about that enemy but for now justthing about the heros and the enemys they just slayed
Thats the end of the story I put alot of time making some bits what i did'nt dream about a special thnaks to AQworld because if it wearnt for them i would'nt have dreamed the dream don't be afraid to leave a comment
Its all spoken and no description. For all we know, they could be fighting in a land of marshmellows. How do we know what the characters look like? We dont so you need to describe what happens, where they are, what they look like, there personalities. All these things make a story great. Also, work on your grammar.
