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Since school has been over for about a month, I decided to post some of my writings in my English Class and maybe some others. My material is limited though.

Here is my Shakespearean Sonnet-I call it Electric Currents and the Music of Steel:
I like to play musical instruments
It is one hobby I like to do
The ones I play, I will give you some hints
But first I will tell you I play âround two
The first, I have played for five years
âTis a mixed silver, or brass, and plaster
The sound of it will give anyone tears
Itâd be good to know that Iâm a master
The second is a stringed one that is strummed
It can be played if you can stand or sit
Although this one is played by everyone
Only a few are very good at it
Now you know two instruments that I play
I play them all the time, in night or day

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jezz
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Ahh so um. This is an Ode to Musical Instruments?
:P

Its good, I like it!
And you're right, its 14 lines long.
It definately rhymes well and makes sense, too.

Its a shame no one else has commented here =[

Perhaps you should post some more works? You obviously have talent.

pauler94
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You obviously have talent

Thank you My works are limited. I have to write some more.
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