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I like to write short stories and i will keep them here in my Big Brown Book. They might not be perfect, but oh well. Heres my first story.

Ronnie and his Present

Ronnie was 10 years old. He lived in a Village full of lumberjacks. He also asked his dad if he could have a job, but he was always denied. Ronnie couldn't wait to be old enough. Because then he would get a job. It was his birthday and all he wished fo was a job. He thought he'd be rejected again. His dad brought him a big box. Ronnie didn't care to open it, but he did it anyway. It was a kids bow and arrow. He was glad his dad bought it for him. At least he could practice. Then his dad started walking, Ronnie following him. He told him to stay here and play with his bow and arrow, but not to go anywhere else. Ronnie couldn't practice here, so he thought of a plan. That night he snuck out of the house, and went to the barracks. He slept over there, because it was closed. The next morning he started practicing with a target. His dad came looking for him. He saw him and started yelling, but then he saw how many bulls-eyes Ronnie had. He gave him a real bow, and he hit ore bulls-eyes. Ronnie then trained for a long long time.

Epilogue

Ronnie was now 17. In the towns military. He was the best archer there. He then was injured very badly in war. Almost killed. He stopped serving for the military. His dad and the town was all upset. Ronnie left the town, so they could live happy. Ronnie than had to be a pioneer. He hitch-hiked. Used tracks, and lived his own. Somehow when he was 22 he came back to his hometown. Everyone was glad to see him. Ronnie re-joined the army. He always wore a red bandana and eyepatch. The signs of a true warrior, and it has lived ever since.

Well i hoped you liked my first story.