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Graham
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Graham
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I wrote this when I felt ignored, I'm removing it from About because I want more space... and I don't want this to be deleted completely. here ya go

disappointment
feelings repent
i am ignore
heart is tore

open the door
let me in
it won't hurt
let me stay
i am hurt
just for today
back to dirt
i will go
unquestioned

such a quiet pond
streamless and dead
unaroused by footsteps
upon its head

giving in
standing up
let others win
helpless pup

often stolen
am forgiving
forced repeat
not living

lifes a ride
has ups and downs
turns of tide
it is unfair
run and hide

can you take more?
history repeats
shut this door
struggle for leet
i am alone
give me sleep
accident prone
death is cheat

take away this noise
i can no longer handle it
life is not poise
digging my pit
life is choice
digging my grave
life is sh*t
i am a dark cave

thought overload
extreme analysis
bring me home
bring me a kiss
i am not alone
experience bliss
all leads to disappointment

i sing this chime
suffocating
all the time

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the_manta
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the_manta
4,535 posts
Peasant

This is good, Graham. I enjoyed reading it.

Do you write much poetry?

MrMonkey3
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MrMonkey3
495 posts
Nomad

This is really good I'd like to know the answer to that too manta

thisisnotanalt
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thisisnotanalt
9,821 posts
Shepherd

Pretty good. If you want some CC, then just ask.

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