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2 2007
Flippin3500
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Shepherd

I wrote these lyrics about a really good friend. Every line has a meaning, so don't think I wrote it to be dramatic.

This song is supposed to be sung soft and slow. It would go with a song with more music than lyrics.

I hope you like it.



Ocean skies are not too far away,

But we know that they're not here to stay

Let's make it last, atleast for today

__________

No one understands the skies at night

Are they wrong, or are they right?

Seein' stars, outta sight

__________


Thinkin' 'bout babies that could never be born

Reaching lost hearts that were once torn

Gettin' lost wounds like thorns

We know (fade out)

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VoteSocialist
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Nomad

That was actually pretty good.

Flippin3500
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Shepherd

Thanks. I've never wrote a song before. I'm gonna add a little more to it later.

Thanks for the feedback.

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