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Hi! This is Moat, and I present to you The Adventures of ArmorGames Book 3: The Fallen


The Adventures of ArmorGames: The Fallen
Chapter 1: What was...

The young boy ran away. He didn't want to: it was like his legs had possessed the rest of him. He could see the illuminations of the fire and the screams of the others. He bit his lip as he slumped on the wood pile, exhausted and unable to run any longer, his legs burning. Only then did he allow the tears to flow, watching the fire burn down what was his home. And then, gripping his knife, he left.

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The Adventures of ArmorGames: The Fallen
Chapter 6: Again?

Deloric trudged back to the camp. The snow and winds had faded,and all that was left was a gentle thaw, and a bitter stinging left over from the cold. He'd been given provisions and a backpack to carry his things on the way home, as well as having been allowed to keep the sword and his grisly trophy(the mayor certainly didn't want it). For a few hours now he'd been going back, determined to reach home and be acquitted. He wasn't sure what had happened when he beat up Marle; no, that wasn't true. He'd had full control of himself, but it was as if something else was...him. Something with a dark fury behind it. He heard a faint rustling in the nearby woods, and snow and dew was dislodged from one of the pines. Deloric held his sword high, ready for attack. But something hit him in the back of the head, and he went out cold.

Already coughing up blood, Deloric awoke, breathing heavily. The crisp dawn air he'd remembered last had given way to freezing darkness. He went to unsheathe his sword; having some sort of defense in his hands would calm him down. His hand swiped empty air where his scabbard was. Looking around more, Deloric saw his weapons neatly piled to the side of a roaring campfire. And sitting next to the campfire were several people, strange people, with dark, scarred, tattooed faces and cruel glints in their eyes. Most of all, Deloric saw the frightening weapons they held casually. One of them looked over at him.
"Look, lads! Dinner's awake!" he said, grinning, to show a mouth full of sharp teeth filed to points. Deloric felt a numb shock go through him. Dinner? The other rogues began to approach Deloric, who, with wide eyes, got up and started to run. But he was easily thrown to the ground by the leader.
"Not so fast, friend," he said. Deloric struggled to get up, but he was still slightly weakened from the wyvern battle, the cold, and his injuries. The leader put a knife to his throat, and saw his missing fingers.
"Seen battle?" he said, sneering. Deloric shook his head, wide-eyed.
"Frostbite, then," said one of the other rogues. "Look, Olin, let's just kill him and get it over with."
"I'm getting to that," snapped Olin, waving his knife around. He glanced at Deloric again. "He's not worth it. We've got a better deal over there." he gestured to someone unconscious, on the other side of the fire. Deloric hadn't noticed them because they were wearing all black, which blended with the darkness, and it was difficult to see past the blinding bright fire. The body didn't stir, and Deloric felt a growing dread that it was dead.
"So...we let him go?" said a rogue.
"We don't just let him go," said Olin.
"Well?" said the rogue
"Take his things and knock him out. And since he's already apparently had a taste of ice, give him some fire," said Olin, a wicked, cruel glint enveloping his eyes. The rogues around him nodded, and started to approach Deloric. Next thing Deloric knew, he was out cold.

He had no idea how much later he woke up. His head was down in the soothing snow. He didn't dare move. What if the bandits were still there, ready with their fire? The burns and bruises on his face, arms, and legs were still excruciating, although the snow numbed most of it with its cold. Finally, Deloric sat up. He couldn't see anyone. His leather clothes were still on, thank Moat, for without them he would've frozen to death even in the thaw. The bandits had only taken things of value; his food and water, sword, and what meager coins he had. He held a small clump of snow in his freezing hands; luckily, he hadn't gotten frostbite again. The warmth in his hands quickly melted the snow and turned it into water. Thirsty, he gulped it down, and did this until his thirst was quenched. Then, fearing what he would find, melted the snow with his hands. The puddle reflected his face. It was scarred and disfigured with several fresh, red burns.

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Now I feel sorta half-bad for poor Deloric. First he gets a lot of his fingers and toes cut off, now his face is disfigured by burns...
But that's just part of the big picture, the ultimate story, The Fallen. Which, by the way, may very well be my best story when it's finished. That doesn't mean it will be popular though. Cuz I don't think it will.
But what do you guys/girls think?? I'd like some more feedback.

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Awww...I feel pretty bad too. I'm kinda disgusted now. Great story though. How many chapters do you expect?

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Dunno..
Disgusted? Crap...I tried not to be descriptive. Am I doing better with the chapter length? I tried to do that like everybody suggested.

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Lol, I think i's fine the way it is.

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The Adventures of ArmorGames: The Fallen
Chapter 7: Revenge Rage

Deloric stood up, breathing heavily. He fought to constrict his rage and pain. He flexed his fists. He failed at stopping his anger. The creature took control. He searched through the deep but melting snow, unarmed and completely defenseless. But Deloric, the supposedly helpless one, was the hunter. He finally caught tracks of the band of rogues. He followed the tracks relentlessly. But of course, Deloric wasn't really in control, not really. The bloodthirsty creature that had attacked Marle was. And it was out for vengeance.

Olin sat down on the log, poking at the fire. He'd decided simply to kill the man; they'd found a deer. A deer! The delicious animal had come with the thaw. And they'd simply tossed the man's body into one of the melting ice rivers and ate the deer instead. Suddenly, he heard a rustling in the evergreens. He gripped his stolen sword till his knuckles turned white. But a sudden flash and a dislodging of snow signaled the approach of a human. They grabbed a sword discarded by the fire and threw it like a javelin at Olin. Surprised, and without time to dodge, the sword went straight through Olin. And he died, watching his followers descend upon the attacker. At least he would get his revenge...

Deloric, in a red rage, attacked the rogues. He hurled a sword straight through the leader, and in a deadly dance of swords, and before he knew it, his enemies were laying, groaning and bleeding, at his feet. He purposefully stepped on them as he left the camp, after retrieving his sword from Olin.

A few hours after his blood rage, Deloric stopped on the ground. He held his head in his hands. Was he losing control? What had he done to those people? This was all wrong...

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Whoa Deloric's pissed. I don't get how Olin could get revenge if he's dead though...

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Nah he thought that the other rogues would kill Deloric...
Guess not.

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The Adventures of ArmorGames: The Fallen
Chapter 8: A Darker Path

Cole sweated, swinging his sword in an arc at the dummy. Its head was easily lopped off. Straw from the dummy blew right out. Cole coughed, and dusted himself off. Suddenly there was a shout at the camp border.
"Cole!" shouted the apprentice on watch duty. "D-Deloric's back," Cole caught a faint tremble in his voice. Already knowing what he would find, Cole walked over to the border gate. He prepared himself for the grisly sight he knew he would find.

Deloric waited for Cole, at the camp borders. When he saw Cole, he bowed respectfully, his hood pulled over his face and his thick leather gloves on. He was ashamed of his injuries. He gritted his teeth. Cole didn't know yet; but of course Deloric should tell him.
"Cole," he said respectfully.
"Welcome back, Deloric," said Cole. "How was your quest?" Cole knew full well what he would say, but shouldn't tell him. Deloric's eyes narrowed. He told Cole the story, coldly, but still stuttering at some parts. And Cole's eyes didn't have any sympathy.


"Deloric!" said the camp mage, from her shelter. Deloric stiffly walked over.
"What?" he growled.
"I have something to tell you," she said tentatively. Her aged hands steepled.
"Well, get on with it then," said Deloric irritably.
"I had a vision a few weeks ago about your quest...I told Cole about it," she said.
"And?" Deloric said, breathing heavily to contain his impatience.
"He knew everything. The injuries, the death of the town, the destruction of the wyvern..." said the mage.
"WHAT!" bellowed Deloric. His face turned red with fury and he stormed out.
"Wait!" she shouted.Deloric drew his sword and ran towards Cole.

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Ooh, now Deloric is even more pissed. I never knew it would come to this...

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You think he's pissed now?
Just wait and see...

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O.O That totally caught my attention...but...I'll wait and see...

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You know how I just love making my readers suffer by waiting for the exciting chapters...so instead of really posting the next chapter(which is done, by the way), I'll post the TEASER!


The Adventures of ArmorGames: The Fallen
Chapter 9: Enshrouded


"I don't need rage or some prophecy to make me powerful!" growled Deloric "I already am!".


"But it was for your own good!"
"How could anything good ever come from this?"


They fell to the ground, bleeding and clutching their wounds


That is the end of the teaser!
P.S.- Didn't I say I was evil? Muahahaha!
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Fine fine fine fine I relent...
Ok, you didn't beg for it, but my patience is extremely short...

The Adventures of ArmorGames: The Fallen
Chapter 9: Enshrouded

Deloric ran up to Cole, who was unprepared, and slashed at him diagonally. Cole just managed to dodge the blow, which would've killed him, so it just sliced a thin cut in his cheek.
"Wait!" shouted the mage again. She started to make symbols in the air. Deloric drew his knife from his boot and hurled it at her. Eyes wide, Marle dove at her and took the mage to the ground, and the knife whizzed through the air where her forehead was.
"Deloric," grunted Cole, who had drawn his sword and was defending himself from the furious apprentice, slashing and jabbing. "What is this?"
"Oh, don't pretend you don't know," spat Deloric, having to go on the defensive as other apprentices noticed the battle going on, retrieved their weapons, and helped their mentor. "You knew what was going to happen to me...and you still sent me out there."
"You were told...yes. I knew. But it was for your own good!" Cole exclaimed, dodging a lunge. The blade impaled Cole's brown tunic instead.
"Oh, really? For my own good? How could anything good ever come from this?" spat Deloric. He quickly drew his hood back. Several apprentices froze as his frightening, scarred face came into view. Taking advantage of the lull, Deloric swung his sword in a huge arc. Several apprentices' stomachs were slashed during this, and they fell to the ground, groaning.
"The prophecy said that it would make you more powerful...unleash your rage," Cole continued desperately.
"Oh, my rage is out all right!" roared Deloric. He swung his sword in a killing overhand blow.
"But if you controlled it, you could become one of the greatest warriors ArmorGames has ever seen! As great as Strop or Moat themselves!" yelped Cole, on the defensive again.
"I don't need my fury or any prophecy to make me powerful!" growled Deloric. He jabbed at Cole. Suddenly, the mage, who had been inconspicuously casting a spell in a corner of the dirt camp, released her spell. The net of the Stun spell hit Deloric squarely in the chest, and he fainted. Cole went to behead him, but was stopped.
"Don't!" exclaimed the mage. "Remember the prophecy." And Cole sheathed his sword, glaring with unmasked disgust and hatred at Deloric's unconscious body.

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Lol, the teaser didn't work on me. You already released Chapter 9 when I saw it.

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