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I'll post my poetry about bad things here, until I build enough to release a thread in the AMW section.

First will arrive shortly. As in 5-10 minutes.

Right*trying to put a cheerful ring in my voice*
Meanwhile, I need to get to bed. It is almost 2:00 am. If I can sleep...

Also, another spin to things on this topic: What do you think the punishment should be for these things?

Evil has graced my eyes,
Another soul dies,
Only the wicked can do this,
Only the wicked can see this.

I learned there is no mercy,
Only pity.
Mercy is for the weak,
And the wicked are not weak,

If they were weak,
They wouldn't kill.
If they aren't weak,
Then mercy is undeserved.

The souls that are wicked,
The souls that are truly evil,
Those are the ones I speak of,
And those are the ones that should die.

Death is something they incited,
Death is something they deserve.
But if we do that are we any better?
Are we any better than the wicked soul we kill?

I think not.
Yet it must be done,
It must occur.
It must, or we have yet another soul who does not deserve life.

Once murder is finished,
After that final blow,
The soul ceases to be human,
And becomes lower.

They all go to hell,
But what about the executioner?
Does he go to hell?
I think not.

THE END

Sorry if it's choppy. It's my thoughts in poem version. It has some meaning though.

Wow TSL...deep and morbid. We're becoming more and more like Nichodemus, I think...
Couldn't sleep either, huh?

Couldn't sleep either, huh?

Wow TSL...deep and morbid. We're becoming more and more like Nichodemus, I think...

Couldn't sleep either, huh?

My interpretation. Sorry for sentence length variations. I tried to get it in different points of view every time; the victim, the murderer, the family, etc.

Tick tock, my time is running out
What am I doing here?
What are they doing to me?
They are evil, without a doubt
And I must just say good bye to all those I hold dear
I wanna be set free
But the pain and suffering, I can't think through this
All I want now, is a way through the pain, death so bliss


I might be insane
I like causing pain
I don't care about them
I don't care about their end
I don't care what lives they could've lived
If I didn't kill them
I just wanna kill and kill and kill again
Cuz that's what always happens in the end
Evil in this world
Always has been
Always will be
And so I'll get off with my life
Even though I caused death, misery, and strife

What have they done?
The clouding pain
They must be insane
My poor poor friend
My poor poor wife
What a terrible way to end their life
And yet they go away almost free
And that is not near enough for me

Umm... I hope you liked? Tell me what you think. I personally don't think it turned out so great, especially since it doesn't have a title.

Quality wasn't bad. I think...maybe a little repetitive, maybe not enough rhyming. Didn't flow. Still good though. Great(although depressing) message
What did you think of mine?

Wow. Really good. I could see both of these being songs, to be honest. Sort of metalish in their dark natures though.

I'm not so much scarred for life as I am frightened to death. Just knowing that that type of person does exist...seeing it...I just can't sleep. I'm always keeping my eyes open, glancing everywhere. And I have to watch my pets and family at all times too...

Maybe this should go in the AMW section?
But the topics are so dark...

This seems like a theme for the poetry contest... It needs to be...

*Sigh*

Do you have anything to contribute, Manta?
Meanwhile, I am writing my second poem. Stories I can't do because they're too descriptive and specific...

This seems like a theme for the poetry contest... It needs to be...