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Moabarmorgamer
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Hi. This is Moat. And this is where I would like to see people post some morbid poems, stories, etc. Although they don't have to, and I will be mainly the one posting here. First entry to my Morbid Literature Journal:

A very much more selfless, brighter, and, dare I say, more optimistic and therefore idiotic, view.

The Only Thing I Ask

I am on the test, the trial
For my life, the danger is dire
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Is to keep others from the same fate
Protect them from this amount of hate
Save the others
Please God the only thing I ask of You
Save my friends and my mother
From this horror
My photographs, my memories
Will have to help me through
I'm lonely and I'm tired
I'm missin them again
The hatred of others burns like fire
Why do they hate me?
I'm just a man
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect my family and friends
And my strength, it will hold
Through the dark and through the cold
I'm hurting and I'm hated
They hurt me with word and rod
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
The others around me have lost hope
But I pray to You
And I remember the good times
You have given me
With my family and friends
And I can pull through
Because hurt is nothing new
In this world
And all I need to do
Is pray again to You
I'm lonely and I'm tired
I'm missin them again
The hatred of others burns like fire
Why do they hate me?
I'm just a man
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect my family and friends
And my strength, it will hold
Through the dark and through the cold
I am weak outside
They have hurt my body and my mind
For no reason other than I'm different
I believe that the other prisoners went
Well, I am still alive
As long as I can, time after time
Think about those I love
Those left so far behind
But I can't help but wish
That I could be there again
Back where I love to be
There's nothing here for me
On this road of life
But I trust You, dear God
And I pray to You, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Save them this day
I'm lonely and I'm tired
I'm missin them again
The hatred of others burns like fire
Why do they hate me?
I'm just a man
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect my family and friends
And my strength, it will hold
Through the dark and through the cold
There's no one here
Noplace to go
My overwhelming fear
Oh, no no no
But it's not for me
It's for them
I will believe they're safe
Until the end
And there may be horror
There may be strife
But if I lose them
It'll be like a knife
And to you I pray
Dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect them on this darkest day
When I'm not around
When I'm much too far away
I'm lonely and I'm tired
I'm missin them again
The hatred of others burns like fire
Why do they hate me?
I'm just a man
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect my family and friends
And my strength, it will hold
Through the dark and through the cold
Dear God
You can take me
Save them, protect them
The only thing I ask
Save the others from this fate
Protect them all, upon this day

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Bronze
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Thankyou jezz, I should probably add some more detail, but I really just wanted to get it on here. And lol, it can be hard to explain things when you don't give the people names, sorry if it was confusing.

Moabarmorgamer
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Yeah bronze. I liked it. Short and descriptive, yet disturbing at the same time.

the_manta
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Wow. You guys can really pour out the writing but fast!

This thread really took off.

I'm not in a writey mood as of now, so... Yeah. >.<

Moabarmorgamer
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It's ok manta. I know what writer's block does to people...
Meanwhile, here is the latest and greatest version of this thread's official caution sign!
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/JJnapper/signy-1-1-1.gif

Bronze
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^Lol nice. to bad it doesn't warn the people for the first 10 pages :\\

Moabarmorgamer
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Umm....well...
GET OFF MY THREAD YOU LOUSY KIDS!
How's that? I figure that shout carries for 10+ pages?

Moabarmorgamer
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Somebody, yell at me. I'm serious. I need to kick my butt into gear. I just have writer's block right now...

samdawghomie
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WRITE YOU FREAKIN LESSER LIFE FORM!!!!

YOU DON"T AMOUNT BUT TO A SACK OF ROCKS!!!


That is unless you write something.

Help Moat?

the_manta
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THERE ARE ONLY TWO THINGS THAT COME FROM YOUR TOWN, MOAT! STEERS AND YOU! YOU'LL NEVER ACHIEVE ANYTHING IF YOU DON'T WRITE RIGHT NOW!

Did that help too? :3

TSL3_needed
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[b]WRITE RIGHT NOW. IF YOU DON'T, WE'LL LOSE INSPIRATION. OR NOT. BUT WE DON'T WANT THAT!!![b]

Unless you write of course.

Moabarmorgamer
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RAAAAWR! I'M WRITING!


Thomas breathed heavily as the shadows whispered and the lightning crackled around his rudimentary shelter. He held his head in his hands and closed his eyes, ignoring the ice-cold rain that poured down on him.
"Why can't the voices just stop and go away!" he shouted. The voices had spoken to him ever since he had been sent away to the war; ever since he had first killed. And Thomas simply couldn't get the look in the poor man's eyes as he raised his gun and shot him. And the voices had been speaking to him ever since, urging him to kill again. Thomas hadn't slept for almost a week straight now, but he was afraid that if he slept, he would have nightmares again. The blood spattering, the children screaming...that was why Thomas had to move away from civilization. So he never hurt anyone. And yet...the voices seemed to calm him down the more they spoke. Their promises of power and blood...

"Thomas!" exclaimed his friend, waving. "You're finally back! I was getting worried about you." Thomas strode up. His friend took a step back; Thomas's eyes seemed to glow red in the light, and he looked as though he had bloodstains all over him. Thomas raised the knife he held in his right hand, and plunged it into his friend. And then, the voices held him. He couldn't stop, jabbing again and again, the blood spurting like a fountain, the screams echoing like an eerie melody of death. Thomas's tears and his screams melded with that of his friends. And after mutilating the body, laughing, but not happy, Thomas found himself to be dying inside. He held his head in his hands again. And then, like a startling sign that the voices were angry for some reason, Thomas felt a sharp pain, a jolt, all throughout his body. He fell to the ground, still laughing maniacally. And then, as though the voices and Thomas could neither take it anymore, his heart simply seemed to burst. His heart literally exploded, the blood splattering and mixing with the rain pouring down. And so he fell.
Ugh, all my stories are sub-par somehow...
Fun Fact: It's true. You can actually run yourself so hard your heart explodes. It's happened to Huskies in races before.
Thanks for the shove, Sam. It helped.

Moabarmorgamer
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Double ninja'd. Manta and TSL helped too.

Moabarmorgamer
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What did you all think?

thisisnotanalt
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A pain in your side
metaphorical wounds still bleed
its been years since I last cried
but they flow in earnest, I concede

been stretched to the limit
lain low, beaten and stabbed
no crescendo yet, I can sense it
coming, masked by noise and gab

caught in an intrinsic fear
an instilled worry, grasping your throat
death in the air, blurry scene, eyes not clear
don't breathe the shock, you'll choke

Tear-soaked catharsis, sadness, acclimation
can't even see eye-to-eye with your reflection
you already knew, though shaken by the proclamation
it's a confirmation, not a correction






What is it? Lol.

samdawghomie
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English Please Alt?

Umm, not sure. Lol

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