So are there too many wrinkled on the cloth, or are they not flowing right? Wrinkles are new to me, it's just trial and error right now.
Basically, the wrinkles there are, aren't helping making the picture, and the clothing doesn't look like it's falling correctly, perhaps because of the way it has been cut.
But it might be the effect of the rather thick cloth used, so it might not need to be something you should consider redoing at this point.
Clothing is rather difficult to make fall right, and at some point it gets to be more on gefühl than technique. If you are not practised with it, it's easier to go with what looks right rather than what is right.
Leaf is real, because I had to have the actual texture somewhere in the collage. I hated the project, to be honest. I just had to settle for an idea. The leaf tree was about my fourth, and plan D doesn't usually work.
Fair. Everyone has something that just rubs them the wrong way, so it's totally understandable. The idea is good enough too, it's just not well executed, but who can blame you.
You did have a good colour choice, and the ink sketch is neat for this, it is just set off by the use of something realistic, when the rest isn't in the same way.
I wanted the red to really standout. I even thought about asking you to add a light emitting from the big blood patch. And I only noticed the head was slim after the image was on my camera. I thought the camera was supposed to add ten pounds, but it did the opposite in this case.
I guess that is why many artists flip their artwork every so often to see if something is wrong. Gets a new perspective, eh.
Fair enough, though, I guess it's mainly personal preference at this point, because I don't like the mix between the soft, muted shading and lines and then that huge blotch of red in the middle of it all. Though I do appreciate the darker reds where the shading punches through.
It by no means a bad picture, it's just not entirely to my tastes, heh.
(That said, you did do the spots pretty well, they look like a natural spray, so hundreds of thumbs up for that)