This is a book I'm writing, it will be a series, all being Feriban Island books.
Chapter 1: The Real World
It was a stormy night, the day Fellen Key was in the forest. Fellen was 18-years old, a Dragon Scout. There was only 7 scouts this high, the highest of all ranks. Fellen was a perfect scout. You could get each badge, but you could also excel it five times. He had every badge to the fifth power. Except for one, his Dragon Survival Badge. He had only excelled it to the second power. And that's why he is in the forest. To practice his survival. This was the forest of Kaggas. These animals were very small. About the size of a 2-year old. They were fierce and orange. They had dark stripes on them. And Kaggas had sharp teeth that could easily bite off Fellen's arm.
Fellen was sleeping through the storm fine, until midnight. A giant Kagga, about the size of him, attacked. Fellen heard him coming, and could have died if he didnt. He had rolled to the side and got scratched on his eye. Then he kicked the kagga away, but that just furied it. So the Kagga charged. Fellen couldn't see anything, the cat had blinded him. He got pounced on, and he scratched the Kagga's head with a hunting knife. The Kagga was blinded, but only for a few seconds. With gave Fellen enough time to blindlessly look for his spear. He grabbed it and thread it aimlessly. Luckily it stabbed the Kaggas leg. It didnt kill it, but it ran away. Fellen then realized something. In Dragon Scouts, nothing dangerous every happened. And they had supplies and everything. Not this time, this was real, Dragon Scouts was just a myth. He was wearing his Scout shirt for luck, but he ripped it off. He was quitting Dragon Scouts.
I do like it. You did much better this time =) May I hear the inside joke? My only gripe, a few small grammar mistakes. But that's all. Waiting for the next chapter!
Yeah chapter six had lots of mistakes.
The inside joke is I posted it, but the internet broke so i had to post it again XD :P
Rince and Fellen heard a sound. They went outside and saw waves above the water. They knew someone had been spying on them. But who? They thought it was Bobo. He is the only good creature able to swim. Rince was scared. "Think," said Rince "What do you mean?" questioned Fellen "We will be attacked. We need a gameplan," Rince replied. "Ok," Fellen ended the conversation They sat there thinking for quite a long time. Thinking very hard. Should they let the spies attack, or should they attack first? Lots of questions went through there mind. Every now and then a small idea peeped out. But they had to add more. Rince laughed out, "Haha, I have the master plan. Nobody good guys are heroes, Bobo the most likely. But someone else would come. So they had to find out. They would also send a spy. Two of there mikas. They were harmless, so no one bothers killing them besides for the taste. Amazing I know." Fellen agreed, "Yes. Nothing bad about it." The mikas traveled thrugh the river. They saw a bunch of people, and they would stop for every one. Listen for an hour an leave. It was a long long assignment. They had spent 8 hours so far. It was 9 PM. They approached a waterfall. They was a rock path from the bottom going have way up. A man was sitting, holding two rocks. What was he doing? They mikas approached the waterfall, and the man saw them. He got a javelin, and stabbed at a Mika. He caught it. And the other one realized what he was doing. Making Fire. That man was named Eric. He lived in the jungle even though he was very wealthy. He considered money as trade. The only thing he traded for was nothing. He gave away his money. Which is how he gained it. People were amazed how he survived. So they would give him more money. One time he demanded a man who he gave money to, not to return, or else. He returned, and Eric cut off his finger. Eric also would ask not for money, but if you insist on a return, Give him wood. The Mika went back to the castle, telling him about Eric. He knew nothing other than where he was. He told him he was building a fire by the waterfall, and he ate the other Mika. But Rince insisted it was a normal man. So Rince would go to battle against whomever attacked. He expected a very fun fight, since it would be extremely simple.
