ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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FallenSky
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Member - you can only choose one of them to be your Haiku

Yes, I strongly suggest that you make haste when deciding which entry'll be the judged one, for if you don't I won't judge either of these three ^^.
Judging on monday, as stated in the established rules. No stretched lateness this time around; I'm in good shape now!

Zaork
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Trees

towering above
non-conformist deities
envy the freedom

member565
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It is peaceful now
Grey has turned into colours
Freedom is living

I choose this one. Sorry I didn't know you were only allowed one entry

FallenSky
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Thanks member, that's without a doubt a very good choice ^^.

obould
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Fallen, did you see mine?

Saving123
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How about an early judging Fallen if there aren't anymore entries of course.
And I brought some chocolate as a bribe

TuxedoPenguin
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Our shackles broken
Running, sweat into our wounds
Stinging, but home free

DrElmer
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A new air is born
Long-awaited liberty
Shines its lovely face

tomertheking
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Zaork,please read the topic of the haikus.

aknerd
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Zaork,please read the topic of the haikus.


Tomer, please read his haiku. It is obviously about freedom. "Trees" is just the title.
Saving123
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towering above
non-conformist deities
envy the freedom

See it says freedom and envying the freedom of the trees or something. Anyways yeah.
DrPepperRain
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But, the Haiku is supposed to be 5-7-5 not 2-2-3

Saving123
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But, the Haiku is supposed to be 5-7-5 not 2-2-3

Oh I see the problem, that's counting words, when your supposed to count syllables.
Zaork
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So do I have to re-do or is mine eligible?

FallenSky
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No zoark, it's perfectly fine and well fit for judging, don't worry.
As for hurried judging;
Hurried judging = Spontaneous combustion
So...no...Anyways, people are still submitting right.

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