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Haiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Posted Aug 29, '09 at 6:57pm

GuitarHeroFtw

GuitarHeroFtw

868 posts

i liek pondz they iz
very coulourful and they
are made of water.

 

Posted Aug 29, '09 at 7:00pm

shayneii

shayneii

2,688 posts

You might have a better chance at winning if you used proper grammar... :P

 

Posted Aug 29, '09 at 9:21pm

dudeguy45

dudeguy45

3,039 posts

What is wrong with it?

 

Posted Aug 29, '09 at 9:24pm

Bronze

Bronze

2,454 posts

What is wrong with it?


A haiku is a poem composed of 3 lines, 5 syllables for the first and last line, and seven for the middle.

5-7-5
 

Posted Aug 29, '09 at 9:28pm

Moabarmorgamer

Moabarmorgamer

8,674 posts

The water ripples
The stone skips across the pond
The frogs leap away

 

Posted Aug 29, '09 at 9:31pm

dudeguy45

dudeguy45

3,039 posts

gleaming from a lemon sun
silence and peace come over your soul
yes, you have found nirvana

Happy, BUDDY?

 

Posted Aug 29, '09 at 9:34pm

Bronze

Bronze

2,454 posts

Nope, still not right XD

Five syllables please
Seven will be good right here
Five more for here too

There, that is a Haiku about the structure of a haiku.

 

Posted Aug 29, '09 at 9:36pm

Moabarmorgamer

Moabarmorgamer

8,674 posts

Lol. Unfortunately bronze, this week's theme is a pond, not proper haiku etiquette.

 

Posted Aug 30, '09 at 6:27am

StormDragon

StormDragon

4,585 posts

Ponds have fish to eat
Koi ponds have big goldfish
Can we eat goldfish?

I love Japenes culter.

 

Posted Aug 30, '09 at 9:21am

Maverick4

Maverick4

6,891 posts

I cantez standz iz winz people dooo thiz!