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Maverick4

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Peasant

Posted August 24, '09 12:48am UTC

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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acmed

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Nomad

Posted February 9, '12 12:13pm UTC

Round is closed! I will get judging done as soon as possible!

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StrategicCaptain

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Nomad

Posted February 10, '12 11:40pm UTC

Noooooooooooo
Hope i'm not too late. >.<

A Short Cruise

Untamed and beserk,
the seas we are at today,
prepare for battle.

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daleks

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Chamberlain

Posted February 11, '12 12:20am UTC

Noooooooooooo
Hope i'm not too late. >.<

Sorry man. You are too late. The round ended yesterday. Don't worry though. Acmed should create another round this weekend.

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nichodemus

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Grand Duke

Posted February 11, '12 6:10am UTC

Going out on a limb here, not only should he, but he will, or I'm protesting!

Jk.

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acmed

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Nomad

Posted February 11, '12 3:02pm UTC

Going out on a limb here, not only should he, but he will, or I'm protesting!

Jk.

1. I got lots of homework to do.
2. I'm going to a party today and spending the night until midafternoon tomorrow.

HOPEFULLY I get it done by Sunday night.

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Maverick4

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Peasant

Posted February 13, '12 9:56pm UTC

You know Acmed, I think you sucummbed to the late judging even quicker than I did.

I makes me so... Proud...

*wipes away tear*

On a more serious note, I can't believe I actually missed the deadline for this. :/

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MegaIPOD

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Shepherd

Posted February 14, '12 6:50pm UTC

Guess Sunday never came in Acmed's world :/

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acmed

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Nomad

Posted February 14, '12 10:54pm UTC

I'm still busy guys...

I actually wanna say something...

This round and the next round will be my final judgings...

I am too caught up with my grandma in the hospital and school to do this anymore. I will have a similar contest like Mav did when I was picked as judge, unless Mav will gracefully volunteer to take the job back again.

I will miss you all. *sobs*

I'll try to get judging done by tonight.

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killersup10

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Blacksmith

Posted February 14, '12 10:58pm UTC

acmed said
I'm still busy guys...
I actually wanna say something...
This round and the next round will be my final judgings...
I am too caught up with my grandma in the hospital and school to do this anymore. I will have a similar contest like Mav did when I was picked as judge, unless Mav will gracefully volunteer to take the job back again.
I will miss you all. *sobs*
I'll try to get judging done by tonight

killersup gives his regards

WE will all miss you.
hope she gets better soon.*sobs*we will miss you to*totaly breaks down in tears*

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daleks

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Chamberlain

Posted February 15, '12 12:12am UTC

I am too caught up with my grandma in the hospital and school to do this anymore.

Don't worry about us. Stay with your grandma. I hope she gets better.

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acmed

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Nomad

Posted February 15, '12 3:05am UTC

...

You know what, I can work this out. I'll stay! I LOVE YOU GUYS TOO MUCH! *hugs*

Let's judge!

This round's theme was the Feral Seas. Hell yes.

23 friggin submissions. Wow guys.

Message me if you want a comment blah blah derp derp

Let's start.

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5th Place: murasaki9

The waves, they unfurl
their angry fingers snap shut
they roar like a beast

Welcome back with a great poem! I liked the metaphors you used to describe this theme! Well done!

4th Place: phycticpotato

Unfathomable depths
Innumerable waves crash
Boisterous ocean

I enjoyed your wording in this one. It was very nice. Keep it up! (and yes, Unfathomable can be 4 or 5 syllables)

3rd Place: goumas13

Untamed warm ocean
Washing down the surly coast
Cleaning the foul beach

You put a nice scene in this haiku goumas. I felt it through the screen. Lawlz. Welcome back.

2nd Place: ArchKnight

Oceans vast and wide,
Still shrouded demons dwell,
Nature's rage revealed

Great ending. Left me fascinated and happy. . Keep it up, and great rhythm!

1st Place Merit Winner: aknerd

Wild shifting danger
A tiger in the dark depths
We drown in chaos

Great metaphors and wonderful rhythm! You did great! Contact a mod for your merit, please!

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Okay, for Valentines Day, I ACTUALLY GOT A VALENTINE! DDDDDDDDD

So to celebrate my happiness, the theme is All You Need is Love. Due February 25th. Good luck!

...\r\n\r\nYou know what, I can work this out. I'll stay! I LOVE YOU GUYS TOO MUCH! *hugs*\r\n\r\nLet's judge!\r\n\r\nThis round's theme was [b]the Feral Seas.[/b] Hell yes.\r\n\r\n23 friggin submissions. Wow guys.\r\n\r\nMessage me if you want a comment blah blah derp derp\r\n\r\nLet's start.\r\n\r\n_____________________________________________________________________\r\n\r\n[b]5th Place: murasaki9[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]The waves, they unfurl\r\ntheir angry fingers snap shut\r\nthey roar like a beast[/i]\r\n\r\nWelcome back with a great poem! I liked the metaphors you used to describe this theme! Well done!\r\n\r\n[b]4th Place: phycticpotato[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]Unfathomable depths\r\nInnumerable waves crash\r\nBoisterous ocean [/i]\r\n \r\nI enjoyed your wording in this one. It was very nice. Keep it up! (and yes, Unfathomable can be 4 or 5 syllables)\r\n\r\n[b]3rd Place: goumas13 [/b]\r\n\r\n[i]Untamed warm ocean\r\nWashing down the surly coast\r\nCleaning the foul beach [/i]\r\n\r\nYou put a nice scene in this haiku goumas. I felt it through the screen. Lawlz. Welcome back.\r\n\r\n[b]2nd Place: ArchKnight[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]Oceans vast and wide,\r\nStill shrouded demons dwell,\r\nNature's rage revealed[/i]\r\n\r\nGreat ending. Left me fascinated and happy. :). Keep it up, and great rhythm!\r\n\r\n[b]1st Place Merit Winner: aknerd[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]Wild shifting danger\r\nA tiger in the dark depths\r\nWe drown in chaos[/i]\r\n\r\nGreat metaphors and wonderful rhythm! You did great! Contact a mod for your merit, please! :D\r\n\r\n_____________________________________________________________________\r\n\r\nOkay, for Valentines Day, I ACTUALLY GOT A VALENTINE! :DDDDDDDDDD\r\n\r\nSo to celebrate my happiness, the theme is [b]All You Need is Love[/b]. Due [b]February 25th[/b]. Good luck!

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Krizaz

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Nomad

Posted February 15, '12 4:08am UTC

Aw, your judging isn't as fun as it usually is. Usually everyone got judged and got their own little category/title!

got nothing to do... I could judge...[i] hint hint.

My Haiku is Lyrics from one of the best songs by the Beatles.

All you need is love,
All you need is love,
love, love, love is all you need.

You make me happy by referencing this song. Beatles forever!

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Isigna

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Blacksmith

Posted February 15, '12 5:15pm UTC

Love...

Beating hearts are forever;
We are forever together,
In Death's morbid embrace.

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daleks

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Chamberlain

Posted February 15, '12 8:39pm UTC

23 friggin submissions. Wow guys.

Is this you being happy about that, or sad that you could only choose 5 from that amount(and it meant more work for you)?

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murasaki9

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Blacksmith

Posted February 16, '12 1:19am UTC

I'll miss you Acmed! *sobbbb!!!* But your Grandma, I hope she gets better soon!
Congratulations Aknerd for first place!
Wow, I EVEN placed??? Oh well, it wasn't
my best.
I'm submitting something for the new
contest:

Hatred I can slight
I can take anything bad
Love keeps me alive

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